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My Muscle System in the Mage World

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[WPC DEC & JAN 2023 [Fantasy] WINNER!]

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[Talent: Future Seer]

The path to immortality is always a cruel one to tread.

In a world where the Wizard reigns supreme and spells are everything.

Watch Aur’s journey as he walks down the path of immortality, albeit not in a conventional manner.

Muscles!

With the muscle system in hand, he forges a path for himself, slaughtering all his enemies with a punch. But in this world filled with schemes, can he reach the pinnacle or will he perish falling into the spiral of schemes?

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[Scene from the Novel]

"Aren't you supposed to be an ordinary wizard? How are you so strong?" The man muttered as the very earth crumbled, and the mountains behind him split with the sheer pressure of the giant fist descending on him.

There was no surprise the man was crushed into meat paste. Aur looked at the distant sun.

"Throughout Heaven and Earth, I have the strongest muscle," Aur shouted as countless shadows appeared in the corner of his vision.

“You are going to die today,” The tone was cold and unforgiving, with countless figures appearing one by one.

“You cannot re-establish the Laws of this universe again.”



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    Aurelius_Imperator

    Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away [img=strong]

    1yr
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    shubham_sharma_9562

    A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.

    10mth
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    Flipped_123

    I was sceptical at first when reading the first chapters, and i found some of the story quite lacking, but it got a lot better later in the story. So accept some lower quality with the knowledge of it getting a lot better. I would recommebd this book, the only thing lacking is that it only releases 3 chapters per. Week. That is also why i write this review despite not doing so usually, because i want more chapters👀 Read it.

    5mth
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    omitted

    Amazing novel, I truly have never seen such a wonderful story. I need more chapters, I don't think I can survive without reading more!!

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    1yr
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    Adam_8657

    Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not

    11mth
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    Its_Praveen

    The title is really funny🫵. And story seemed to be interesting . More chapters author! So I can read more.

    1yr
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    Daoisth4Otxa

    I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.

    1yr
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    TheEyePatch

    please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.

    11mth
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    lucifer_2805

    Can't really tell much in so few chapters but since it's Aurelius, I'm sure it's gonna be another banger

    1yr
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    vallen_32

    how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.

    9mth
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    Kotik_Kotik

    passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call

    11mth
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    JBFIRE_77

    author didn't you say no romance in the story

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    2mth
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    StylzGT
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    160lbs at 6’1” tall means the MC is a literally twig with ZERO muscle… he should be at LEAST 190lbs to qualify as having “muscles” cause even being 190lbs means it’s all lean muscle.

    7mth
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    Cornep
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    Murder is bad, but EVERYBODY, EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, ALL AT ONCE be murdering. Also he is still a mage, just more battlemage than ranged traditional caster wizard.

    8mth
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    Lawrence_Oshim

    Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.

    1yr
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    Holomez
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    I will read soon, but its Aure, so 5 stars, WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    1yr
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    bluebird74

    The book offers a compelling blend of strategic depth and moral complexity, reminiscent of *Paragon of Sin*'s cultivation-driven power struggles, while weaving in the ruthless pragmatism and ideological intrigue characteristic of *Reverend Insanity*. The world-building shows impressive depth, with a richly detailed magic system and sociopolitical dynamics that hint at vast, unexplored lore. However, the pacing falters slightly in the early chapters: the prolonged village arc, while effective in establishing the protagonist’s roots and motivations, could have been trimmed to allow smoother integration of the broader world. The sudden introduction of the outside world mere chapters before Aur’s departure feels abrupt, leaving readers craving more gradual immersion into the story’s larger conflicts and factions. While the narrative’s ambition is commendable, technical issues like inconsistent grammar—repeated misuse of plurals, tense shifts, and awkward phrasing—occasionally disrupt the flow. A thorough edit would elevate the polish of an otherwise engaging tale.

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    Aaron_Owusu

    Uhh I have no attachment to the mc so far Cus it feels like most of the chapters follow the side chars we will see later but writing quality and all is good though just a boring story wise

    10d
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    Deslimdivi245

    When I started reading this novel, I seemed a little boring to me. But when I kept reading it, I got to like it even more. Although I'm an author myself, I kinda like this story more. I'm learning from you so do well to teach me more

    1mth
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    Diablo_nkisi

    This is actually a pretty decent read. I had always avoided this book because I typically prefer stories with magic-wielding protagonists. However, when someone described the main character as a “close-combat mage,” I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, I can’t give it 5 stars. Without spoiling too much, as the story progresses, the main character stops advancing on the wizard path. It almost feels like the author went out of their way to force this to happen—perhaps to avoid the story becoming too much like a typical mage tale. I’m not sure, but either way, I decided to drop it immediately.

    2mth
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