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Erotic Adventures in the Omniverse: Vampire Lord got too many wives

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作者: Jin_moon

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Finding a strange orb, Jayden finds himself turning into a vampire. Strange quests start to appear in front of him, sending him to different worlds.

He finds himself playing different roles in different worlds, as he gets stronger and gets the most beautiful women from each world.

" So, you want to save your son, impossible. The treason he committed can't be forgiven. "

" Please, *sob*" I'm begging you. I'll do anything if you spare him. "

Jayden looks at the breath-taking beauty kneeling in front of him, as a sly smile appears on his face.

" Anything, you say. Then..."

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Using his mind control abilities, Jayden will become the richest, strongest vampire, and have lots of beautiful women in his harem.

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-No NTR,
But MC will steal other's women.
-Might be a bit slow at the beginning.
-No Yuri

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Jin_moon

Ask me anything if you want, here, related to the story.

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Just_a_Random_guy_

A really Good Novel You should definitely chech it out

4mth
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Daoist66W4wt

This is a very good novel with good romance and grammar

1yr
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Nova_Lagacy

I love it so far author has been doing an amazing job😁👍. pls under no circumstances should you drop it 🙏

1yr
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Prince_Hikarumi

So I will admit this style isnt my particular favorite, in fact, I dislike it. However I do like the flow of the story, when it does indeed flow. It definitely pulls your attention to key bits of Jayden's mind. I do however find the first several chapters lunky. This improves as they continue to post updates, I will say however that its still an issue of wordiness, some bits can be condense to convey the same meaning. But these are growing pains. I cannot wait to see how they continue to grow as a writer. So if you want a good story from a writer that is giving it their best shot, I do recommend, never be afraid of giving critical feedback. Invest in the author and enjoy the returns in story form!

1yr
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knightart7081998

This is a nice one, the Mc is not one dimensional as he clever, cunning and.. .weird. As of now there is nothing much to say because it's still have only 27 chapter but give this one a chance you won't regret it.

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Jin_moon

Finally crosses 700 chapters, it was a long and enjoyable journey

6mth
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GeneralDeFartos_L

It's a great story. Nice characters and competent MC. Story progression is neat, nothing bad sticks out, it's all smooth and nothing illogical. --- The only bad thing I can say here: - Many wives = not good I don't mind if he's a playboy that flirts and does the deed and then dips and disappears. The problem is when he likes someone, we get a lot of details during his conquest to conquer her and how he wifes her up. But after that we readers forget her cuz she's now in his collection, so why go in depth into her character? That's a problem. It'll become more of a problem the more wives he gets, it's just adding wives to his collection and adding baggage on top of his problems. It wouldn't have been a problem if he actually makes them his wife but leaves them in their world. It wouldn't be a problem if MC was just trashy and he just uses them then forgets them without making them wives. It becomes a problem when he's constantly trying to juggle between them when they're with him, we don't see their personalities and don't go in depth of their psyche, they just become a chore for the MC at that point. As a reader, I'm tired just reading about he plans his dates with each one. ----- Now, where my gripe lies: Why the heck is he capturing anyone and everyone and turning them into a wife? He can conquer anyone but no need to turn her into a wife! What's the point of layla? She has absolutely nothing to do with him, so why take her along? She's useless and doesn't add anything to the story. Even Sophie is too much, he just had a slight little connection with her, no feelings and certainly no purpose for MC to take care and wife her up. At this point it just feels like a collect em all type of story in terms of harem. The same type of problem every harem story has. Authors don't focus of the story and feelings behind characters. They focus on collecting as many girls for MC as possible within the confines of the story. I see this story heading in a similar direction. If the harem gets too much, even the author wouldn't know how to deal with it. My favorite characters in this story are: MC Anna Emily (cute lil kid) Favorite wives: Alice Sasha All others are just extra with no real need to add them in the story, it would've been fine if they were in their own world.

8mth
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Marlana_McLaughlin

I liked this story a lot, though i did not liked that he just had s*x with any and every woman.

6mth
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shadow_king_2265

this is the one of best novel ever hope you create such more amazing novels

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Empyrean0

really good novel author well done i hope you continue it

2mth
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Black_Cherry_9664

Whoever Is Not reading this Novel is missing out!! Keep Going author !!

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Email_Com

novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"

1yr
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Black_Domain

A masterpiece from author. This is definitely one of best harem novel out there. Author,the orb's lvl system is wierd, sometimes it doesn't make sense. like mc worked hard with system but stupid Xander already at lvl 300k, then maybe vampire king lvl Billn?.Also bro don't forget to add Amelia in to slave list not harem..

1yr
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Han_Sirang

He is weird XD I have to say, I like him a LOT better than many other MCs who are one dimensional. I like morally grey characters. The premise is already good enough for me to stick with it.

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AIRA_
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Although I'm not a fan of the genre, I found the writing style and power system to be pretty interesting. would recommend to interested in the harem genre.

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Tanner_Jones_8014

Really liking the novel so far, but I am having a hard time imagining some of the characters. I tried to use the discord link. However, it said it was expired, any way you could post a new one?

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Spankmaster

A really well writen novel. I'd say one of the best novels on webnovel, Just my opinion tho. The world building is great but could be a little better but who cares🤷🏽‍♂️ its already so good🤠 Just hope to see anna blake meet jayden soon and sydney. Hope to see 1000 more chapters mate🤣 maybe id tie you to ur chair so u can write all day🤣💀

1mth
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PredatorPugSS

How many wives does he have currently right now

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