Spankmaster

Spankmaster

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2024-03-27 加入 Global
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Spankmaster
Spankmaster
3 hours ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
1 months ago
Commented

Keep the chapters comming or we gotta tie u to ur chair😅🤷🏽‍♂️

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
1 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
2 months ago
Posted

Writing quality can be better without the shortcuts of words sometimes. Words like nvm and btw just feels wrong when reading a book. Ik its easier and all that and everyone understand the meaning but it just feels wrong and could take down a lot in quality. Story development is to early to say something about at the moment. Character design is good about a 4 star id say. Explanations about characters could be made better, but overall design is quite good. The world building is also too early to say much about. The world building is a slow subject that should take time and many chapters that you dont have at the moment😅 Good read id say but could be better. Ik you want to make the best book you can and i hope you can make a much better storyline in the future when i come back for a reread. Hope you make a great book author.

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
2 months ago
Posted

Sounds interesting. Imma give it a good read and give my comment on it later. Just wish it had more chapters but read ur comment about being a long novel so just gotta wait😅 If i like it ill support you as much as i can mohaha

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
2 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
2 months ago
Posted

A really well writen novel. I'd say one of the best novels on webnovel, Just my opinion tho. The world building is great but could be a little better but who cares🤷🏽‍♂️ its already so good🤠 Just hope to see anna blake meet jayden soon and sydney. Hope to see 1000 more chapters mate🤣 maybe id tie you to ur chair so u can write all day🤣💀

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
5 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
7 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Spankmaster
Spankmaster
7 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola