What do you suggest? I'm open to try and make it better.
[Serpent's Scale Whip]
Chimerical World System
Fantasy · Han_Sirang
Well the world in this novel is same but different than reality
Ronald & Siesta Corporations, commonly called RS, had designed two separate sets to play this game: the Standard set, which contained the body suit, headset, and haptic gloves but had a lower "immersion" rate, and the Premium set in the form of a full capsule, known as the "VR pod," with a longer life and a 100% "immersion" rate. Saad didn't quite understand what this "immersion" rate meant, as reviews suggested that there was no significant difference in the overall game experience.
Chimerical World System
Fantasy · Han_Sirang
ah so sorry! Just a mistake on my behalf! I will fix it.
so there are two points- he thinks he will be back before sunrise since he has Freya's quest in the game morning time and second is that, Saad never thought of the time he would be wasting fighting monsters.
Thank you for your kind words <3 Ah yes it just might or might not.
can you elaborate?
Wasn't this a little too real?! The status effects were overwhelming, and Saad was in disbelief. He had read that the game was hyper-realistic, but this seemed a bit excessive. How was he going to even play this game if just the first snow caused him so many negative status effects? Perhaps the black fate was a huge issue after all. How was he going to survive and raise his character under these conditions?
Chimerical World System
Fantasy · Han_Sirang
Yes?
Thank you ^^. I do try to keep word count consistent.
thank you <3
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original Chimerical World System
4.92
"What...Just Happened?" He was flabbergasted as he was suddenly saved. "I just saved you and as your savior I demand a reward!" The girl with pale blue hair and golden eyes spoke with a certain arrogance. "Huh-" "Come with me! You are the final puzzle piece." And before he could ask more, more people appeared and he had to sigh. 'Its a game right? Or was I reincarnated?' ----------------------------------------------------------------------- In the enchanting realm of the Chimerical World System, a virtual wonderland with infinite possibilities, millions of players have embarked on their quests for glory. Saad enters the game as Kael Emberflame, under some unusual circumstances. However, what initially appears to be a vibrant adventure soon takes a curious turn. Does Kael hold the key to Saad's ultimate success, or is it a doorway to something much bigger than what he originally thought. ------------------------------------------------------------------ This story is purely fictional.125 Chs 1.1k 收藏
- original
Oath of Being Temporally Yours
4.68
"Erhard." Her voice was bold like her fiery hair. "Who are you?!" The Saint of Water wasn't pleased. But Andromeda wasn't deterred. "I'm your future monarch. So I have kindly come to declare war on you~" "I will come to claim you and the crown, Erhard." "Lets play this game once more~" ---------------------------------------------- At the end of her life, Andromeda strikes a deal with the Deity of darkness to rewrite the chapters of her life. The story unfolds as Andromeda, the Saintess of the Sacred Flame, returns to her past with a mission: to exact revenge on those who orchestrated her downfall and make Erhard hers. Andromeda's obsessive love for Erhard, the fallen King of an enemy kingdom, despite her previous cruelty, unravels a tale of passion, forgiveness, and unexpected alliances in the face of the greatest dangers, cunning enemies, and even in the hands of fickle Deities. Will Andromeda and Erhard be able to unite, or will they be ripped apart by the hands of destiny and the Gods playing their own games? Join them on this journey of Love, Revenge, and Obsession. ----------------------- The story is on hiatus since I am trying to stockpile chapters.103 Chs 204 收藏
In the context of the game, the effects the character feels are a result of the game's design to increase realism and immersion. While the character isn't physically harmed, the game can simulate emotional and sensory experiences—like fatigue, disorientation, or stress from being in intense situations—just like in real life. These effects don’t actually harm the player but are meant to heighten the emotional stakes and make the experience feel more authentic.
Exhaling a heavy sigh, Saad realized that as much as he wanted to brush off the encounter, it had left an impact on him. He climbed the slippery stairs of the well, his body still recovering from the battle, and his mind mulling over the clash with Ruth. As he emerged from the depths, he couldn't help but feel liberated. Having stayed under the surface for so long in darkness had really taken its toll.
Chimerical World System
Fantasy · Han_Sirang