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寫檢討A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.
I was sceptical at first when reading the first chapters, and i found some of the story quite lacking, but it got a lot better later in the story. So accept some lower quality with the knowledge of it getting a lot better. I would recommebd this book, the only thing lacking is that it only releases 3 chapters per. Week. That is also why i write this review despite not doing so usually, because i want more chapters👀 Read it.
Several details relevant to the machinations and motives for different characters are absent. some stuff kind of just happens without much notice, making one think they may have missed 10 or 20 chapters when they have not. Many issues with sentence structure that are quite distracting. It's not just simple misgendering or harmless grammar. Too much focus on some side character I don't give two hoots about because they are supposed to be an MC when it is in fact the guy who keeps claiming to be the side character. Interesting once or twice but quickly becomes a far too overplayed cliche. instead of schemes being elaborate and well thought out, you're left with either petty high school crap or significant, plot important points being left out. I really tried to like it but it's just not a good book
The book offers a compelling blend of strategic depth and moral complexity, reminiscent of *Paragon of Sin*'s cultivation-driven power struggles, while weaving in the ruthless pragmatism and ideological intrigue characteristic of *Reverend Insanity*. The world-building shows impressive depth, with a richly detailed magic system and sociopolitical dynamics that hint at vast, unexplored lore. However, the pacing falters slightly in the early chapters: the prolonged village arc, while effective in establishing the protagonist’s roots and motivations, could have been trimmed to allow smoother integration of the broader world. The sudden introduction of the outside world mere chapters before Aur’s departure feels abrupt, leaving readers craving more gradual immersion into the story’s larger conflicts and factions. While the narrative’s ambition is commendable, technical issues like inconsistent grammar—repeated misuse of plurals, tense shifts, and awkward phrasing—occasionally disrupt the flow. A thorough edit would elevate the polish of an otherwise engaging tale.
Uhh I have no attachment to the mc so far Cus it feels like most of the chapters follow the side chars we will see later but writing quality and all is good though just a boring story wise
When I started reading this novel, I seemed a little boring to me. But when I kept reading it, I got to like it even more. Although I'm an author myself, I kinda like this story more. I'm learning from you so do well to teach me more
This is actually a pretty decent read. I had always avoided this book because I typically prefer stories with magic-wielding protagonists. However, when someone described the main character as a “close-combat mage,” I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, I can’t give it 5 stars. Without spoiling too much, as the story progresses, the main character stops advancing on the wizard path. It almost feels like the author went out of their way to force this to happen—perhaps to avoid the story becoming too much like a typical mage tale. I’m not sure, but either way, I decided to drop it immediately.
Eta mierda suena a cuando un ganster o matón de cuarta quiere ser mago, para que ser mago se solo quieres luchar a puñetazos, ya no hay historias de aventura, solo los deseos de violencia de los autores disfrazados de historia
2+1+1+3+1)/5=1.6 bruh..... I initially thought i found a fun exciting read. i stockpiled for a while before reading the premium chapters ....... i regret this...... we go from a very clearly adventurer world with what seems to be the typical middle age level civilization plus whatever isekai innovations the author can come up with. the premium then jumps into a full blown school without a proper transition from the previous dungeon .... we get two hints about the world and the mc. the mc calls it an alternate earth instead of another world. and he occasionally mentions dieing with a nuke/bomb and being a gang leader. otherwise, the academy tech level and the random latinas came out of the blue. then we learn that the mc and the protagonist template character are; well, I didn't see any disclaimer that the mc was not a goody goody. I thought he was an edgelord and what some of the other reincarnated bad guys were, just dealt a shitty deck. but na. he likes living like he's the only one that matters and the others are only there to be good stepping stones or get the hell of the way and maybe be roughly "helped" away. basically i didn't see enough of a buildup and feel like this was very blatantly pulled out of an a*s. grammar was mostly good. the world and the latinas confuse me.
160lbs at 6’1” tall means the MC is a literally twig with ZERO muscle… he should be at LEAST 190lbs to qualify as having “muscles” cause even being 190lbs means it’s all lean muscle.
Murder is bad, but EVERYBODY, EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, ALL AT ONCE be murdering. Also he is still a mage, just more battlemage than ranged traditional caster wizard.
how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.
Was getting into the book but lost complete immersion when book suddenly spent over 3 chapters on a side char just 3 chapters in as i was getting into the story and mc.
the story is ok. there's a lot of obvious mistakes and shorthands that were never really edited to flow better. the chapters feel like they were split to prolong release
passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call
please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.
Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not
Stop adding girls in cover 😂😂😂😂😂I keep coming here .........................................................................................................
Will the novel is good the writing is good and every character that comes is good not that annoying the mc is smart and doesn’t get in the way of the other mc which makes this novel more interesting and entertaining the mc characters change as time passes it’s still the same but a little different I got to say that this novel has a lot of potential and I hope it does one of my 3th novel that I like in this app I give this a 5/5 give it try you’ll love it
I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.
Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.
Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away [img=strong]
A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.
I was sceptical at first when reading the first chapters, and i found some of the story quite lacking, but it got a lot better later in the story. So accept some lower quality with the knowledge of it getting a lot better. I would recommebd this book, the only thing lacking is that it only releases 3 chapters per. Week. That is also why i write this review despite not doing so usually, because i want more chapters👀 Read it.
Several details relevant to the machinations and motives for different characters are absent. some stuff kind of just happens without much notice, making one think they may have missed 10 or 20 chapters when they have not. Many issues with sentence structure that are quite distracting. It's not just simple misgendering or harmless grammar. Too much focus on some side character I don't give two hoots about because they are supposed to be an MC when it is in fact the guy who keeps claiming to be the side character. Interesting once or twice but quickly becomes a far too overplayed cliche. instead of schemes being elaborate and well thought out, you're left with either petty high school crap or significant, plot important points being left out. I really tried to like it but it's just not a good book
The book offers a compelling blend of strategic depth and moral complexity, reminiscent of *Paragon of Sin*'s cultivation-driven power struggles, while weaving in the ruthless pragmatism and ideological intrigue characteristic of *Reverend Insanity*. The world-building shows impressive depth, with a richly detailed magic system and sociopolitical dynamics that hint at vast, unexplored lore. However, the pacing falters slightly in the early chapters: the prolonged village arc, while effective in establishing the protagonist’s roots and motivations, could have been trimmed to allow smoother integration of the broader world. The sudden introduction of the outside world mere chapters before Aur’s departure feels abrupt, leaving readers craving more gradual immersion into the story’s larger conflicts and factions. While the narrative’s ambition is commendable, technical issues like inconsistent grammar—repeated misuse of plurals, tense shifts, and awkward phrasing—occasionally disrupt the flow. A thorough edit would elevate the polish of an otherwise engaging tale.
Uhh I have no attachment to the mc so far Cus it feels like most of the chapters follow the side chars we will see later but writing quality and all is good though just a boring story wise
When I started reading this novel, I seemed a little boring to me. But when I kept reading it, I got to like it even more. Although I'm an author myself, I kinda like this story more. I'm learning from you so do well to teach me more
This is actually a pretty decent read. I had always avoided this book because I typically prefer stories with magic-wielding protagonists. However, when someone described the main character as a “close-combat mage,” I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, I can’t give it 5 stars. Without spoiling too much, as the story progresses, the main character stops advancing on the wizard path. It almost feels like the author went out of their way to force this to happen—perhaps to avoid the story becoming too much like a typical mage tale. I’m not sure, but either way, I decided to drop it immediately.
Eta mierda suena a cuando un ganster o matón de cuarta quiere ser mago, para que ser mago se solo quieres luchar a puñetazos, ya no hay historias de aventura, solo los deseos de violencia de los autores disfrazados de historia
2+1+1+3+1)/5=1.6 bruh..... I initially thought i found a fun exciting read. i stockpiled for a while before reading the premium chapters ....... i regret this...... we go from a very clearly adventurer world with what seems to be the typical middle age level civilization plus whatever isekai innovations the author can come up with. the premium then jumps into a full blown school without a proper transition from the previous dungeon .... we get two hints about the world and the mc. the mc calls it an alternate earth instead of another world. and he occasionally mentions dieing with a nuke/bomb and being a gang leader. otherwise, the academy tech level and the random latinas came out of the blue. then we learn that the mc and the protagonist template character are; well, I didn't see any disclaimer that the mc was not a goody goody. I thought he was an edgelord and what some of the other reincarnated bad guys were, just dealt a shitty deck. but na. he likes living like he's the only one that matters and the others are only there to be good stepping stones or get the hell of the way and maybe be roughly "helped" away. basically i didn't see enough of a buildup and feel like this was very blatantly pulled out of an a*s. grammar was mostly good. the world and the latinas confuse me.
160lbs at 6’1” tall means the MC is a literally twig with ZERO muscle… he should be at LEAST 190lbs to qualify as having “muscles” cause even being 190lbs means it’s all lean muscle.
Murder is bad, but EVERYBODY, EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, ALL AT ONCE be murdering. Also he is still a mage, just more battlemage than ranged traditional caster wizard.
how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.
Was getting into the book but lost complete immersion when book suddenly spent over 3 chapters on a side char just 3 chapters in as i was getting into the story and mc.
the story is ok. there's a lot of obvious mistakes and shorthands that were never really edited to flow better. the chapters feel like they were split to prolong release
passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call
please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.
Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not
Stop adding girls in cover 😂😂😂😂😂I keep coming here .........................................................................................................
Will the novel is good the writing is good and every character that comes is good not that annoying the mc is smart and doesn’t get in the way of the other mc which makes this novel more interesting and entertaining the mc characters change as time passes it’s still the same but a little different I got to say that this novel has a lot of potential and I hope it does one of my 3th novel that I like in this app I give this a 5/5 give it try you’ll love it
I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.
Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.
Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away [img=strong]