摘要
Magic was a gift, but harry potter was even more gifted than most wizards
He took magic like a fish to water, it seemed like he could achieve anything with enough practice.
But his destiny became even brighter when he met that old lady when he was six
This story will start from when he was six, and it will continue indefinitely
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- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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It´s starting strong, I see a very good story being built up, I hope to read more as I find it quite intresting, although I also belive that the characters need development
A good start for a novel, but I think it still needs lots of work to actually become something truly great, maybe give some storyline to the ladies and make some romance? idk but good luck <3