2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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It´s starting strong, I see a very good story being built up, I hope to read more as I find it quite intresting, although I also belive that the characters need development
LV 1
A good start for a novel, but I think it still needs lots of work to actually become something truly great, maybe give some storyline to the ladies and make some romance? idk but good luck <3
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It´s starting strong, I see a very good story being built up, I hope to read more as I find it quite intresting, although I also belive that the characters need development
A good start for a novel, but I think it still needs lots of work to actually become something truly great, maybe give some storyline to the ladies and make some romance? idk but good luck <3