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"here is……"
"New York War?"
"I crossed into the Marvel universe?"
Next second.
The voice of the system emerged in Louis's mind.
"Congratulations to the host, for getting the Edward Newgate ability experience card from Pirate World!"
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he dropped it he says BECAUSE HE DIDNT GET STONES which we couldnt give him cause the novel didnt support it ... fck logic ... anyway dont read from this person
Chinese translated novels are the worse they don't even research western culture and the way they speak when translated doesn't have anything to do with the movie or how they act
My eyes are bleeding ? first This is a mtl novel ,second it’s a Marvel fanfiction or a chinese cultivation novel ? ...................................
me no like cards :( ...............................................................................................................................
impossible to be read. too many grammar mistakes . possibly MTL translated . do not recommend reading it unless you have patience to understand it(which is near impossible due to mistakes)
this story cool dont drop it and about the stone probpem. its not our (reader) fault this is webnovel fault because we cant find vote button on your story. so i propose that how about you ask webnovel about this problem if they didnt fix it maybe we (reader) can vote your other story to give you stone? how about that?
Writing quality is beyond poor. Grammar is some of the worst I've seen on the site which is really bad. When characters speak the words they say dont fit the characters. Its more like this is a cultivation novel where everyone except the MC is mentally challenged. Stability of Updates is not so great mostly because the grammar is so poor. Story Development cant say much as it hurt my brain to read until chapter 4. Character design is quite poor, entirly 2D no background all other characters seem to follow. none of the Avengers question anything. Cant say anthing about world background as I cant read the story anymore.
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the only thing I saw in the first 10 chapters was how shocking the MCs abilitys are for the marvel heroes. This novel has a serious case of cringerites
The translation is utter dog shit. The sentences sometimes make no sense, dont waste your time on this
I have no problems with people translating fanfics from Chinese, even with bad quality, I don't even have problems with them creating a patreon or something. The problem starts when, in addition to the bad translations, the translator pretends it is his original work.
Really shitty chinese translation DO NOT READ IF YOU VALUE BRAIN CELLS . . . . . . . . ,. ,. , , , , , . , . ,, , . . . . . . . .
i like it. it could use a bit of work but all aroud think it is good also i love cats dont know what that has to do with anything i just love cats
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This has got to be the worst sh*t I've ever seen. This is just plain TRASH. First of all, Nick Fury would never panic, he's the NICK FURY, and also don't read this, this is just a trash chinese fanfiction with overconfident and arrogant attention-wh*re MC(Most chapters are just full of people exaggerating things MC does like how handsome his face is, how he strong he is, blah blah blah,...).
DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!!
do not waste your time here or any other of this leeches translations. None of them are his, and even if he is translating them, they are literally worst than sub par. I didnt read them because just from a glance and not only his profile but at the others reviews, you can tell he is only doing this for patreon to make a quick buck off someone else's work. get a real job fam