/ Movies / Harry Potter: The Lightning King
摘要
An unlucky fellow got struck by lightning and died. His soul travel to the harry potter universe and into the body of the protagonist harry potter. when he woke up he heard a fairy voice. (congratulations to the host for perfectly integrated to protagonistbody . please open newbie gift package)
Ding congratulations to host on receiving thunder thunder devil fruit (one piece)
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
LV 15
The story potential is good but by using au like you are is dangerous. Most of the AU Hp stories I've read that had good potential went down really fast. I'll see how it turns out with the next few chapters but right now I!m not convinced.
Keep going bro it’s great so far. I can’t wait for the next update