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摘要
Max Ryder, an ordinary teenager with dreams of adventure, finds himself facing an unexpected twist of fate when he dies in a tragic accident. However, instead of fading into oblivion, Max awakens in the perilous world of Marvel, where superheroes and villains clash in epic battles. Alongside him is his younger sister, Lumia Ryder, a bright and resourceful girl who holds her own untapped potential.
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Intro is weak, try it and you will love it.
Harem : Check
OP : Check
Fun : Check
Hero : Check
Powerful allies : Check
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I've read quite a few chapters, but these chapters showed me that the main character is dumb, and why he's dumb, because he had a chance to summon any character of a hero or a villain, but he summoned a weak, mentally ill character. But this is only the beginning , and degradation is already taking place .
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OK writing quality isn't bad, world background gets 1 star because it is a marvel amalgam world amalgam worlds always lose the plot trying to keep up with all the crap going on. Story development gets one star because the system is both sapient and sassy which is gay on a level that would have Sulu from star trek yelling OH MY! character design is also the same reason. I just personally find it unreadable mostly due to the system.
Great idea/picture you are trying to build. I love the characters and the powers they are getting, and thinking of what characters would do with their abilities is exciting. But this story loses when it comes to development, everything seems rushed. And loses a lot of the tension in characters developing an ability slowly and starting of mid and getting better as the story develops. I have a lot of hope for this fanfic and that it would be great if author decides to further expand it. So far enjoying the creativity, thanks👌
hey guys, it's me , and with another fanfic, you might find first chap slightly similar to my other one, but everything else is different here and this one is better, just give it a try and you will love it.