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For one individual, the boundary between science fiction and reality blurs when they are unexpectedly transmigrated into the Marvel universe, a place where the technological wonders of their dreams are tangible. Equipped with a system that promises growth and evolution, they begin as an underdog in a world of heroes and villains. Drawing inspiration from the movies, comics, and even cartoons, this alternate universe (AU) tale weaves a narrative that, while familiar, brings its own unique twists and turns. As our protagonist navigates this new life, they will encounter romance, face challenges, and harness the power of advanced technology to rise to the heights of power within the Marvel
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The grammar sucks. The author uses like 2 commas per chapter, so over half of his sentences are run ons and there’s a weird use of exclamation marks. Also, it’s straight up boring so far. I would argue the mc has no personality except for wanting to survive. Half of every chapter is filled with author’s notes (also annoying), one at the top and and one at the bottom so there’s really not that much plot in 26 chapters.
the story suddenly became an X men fic and MC just agrees with them,I mean what .let me rephrase he has no need for them , he knows about the bs plot of X men , and in the story he bad mouths them .then just as professor comes he agree to go with to the x mansion .WHAT!!!!
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honestly MC is one of the types I dislike the most, reckless, immature, hormones controlled teenager. despite how author portray him as smart cuz of his enhancement but still IQ doesn't necessarily equal to wisdom, there a lot of situation showing how stupid he is, ranging from simple as doesn't know how his friends know his address when one of them literally go to his house once a week, suddenly want to kiss Gwen in conversation where his relationship is just a friend thinking she likes him, let the little mind rapist go without any aggression after she trying to enter his mind, gambling the chance peter have different abilities by letting different spider bit him if any per chance the compatibility between the DNA is bad he could dying bruh, and he thought it's great idea to steal all radiated spider in school tour...story development is just so so, nothing unique, he build companies with Peter and Gwen and he doing heroes thingy instead of just focusing on strengthening himself
Started reading this when harem was still a tag. Author then ”changed” his mind to just gwen. If it was just 1 leave gwen with Peter and give mc someone like natasha or felicia. They are atleast goodlooking. Gwen is so ugly to me in her halfshaved feminist hairstyle and I hate ghostspider, such a boring version of spiderman.
Everything was just fine and all until the author decided to have Mc get beaten up by Wolverine while possessing Ch-24 and not to mention NZT which is supposed to give Mc a huge advantage against Wolverine. The fight scene with Wolverine is too generic and anime-like, how can Wolverine disappear in his vision and suddenly appear in front of him like some generic anime fight scene. In the movies and even the comics, Wolverine is NOT that fast to suddenly disappear and appear. And here I thought I finally found a good Marvel fanfic. I know mistakes are inevitable and no one is perfect but from what I just read, this is clearly not a mistake and the author wrote the fight scene with purpose probably just to give the Mc character development. Anyways, this is my honest review, I wish you luck with your fanfic author-san.
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Honestly this book genuinely surprised me. for starters the writing quality is the best you can get on Webnovel there are close to not mistakes at all, the story progression is good to the point where your on edge at the end of every chapter the update schedule is so good that I worry for the Authors health, the Author really makes the characters come to life and making them as realistic as they can be. The while system part is well balanced and not your generic brain dead instant OP system the MC also had a personality and its not being a degenerate who can't stop fantasizing about the girls, it's an actual character who acts and thinks like someone who was brought into another world that he knows almost everything about everything the MC does is realistic and not something stupid that an Author would claim as realistic. it's something unique and hey take it from the Critic like myself read up to CH15 and see it for yourself Honestly the Author cooked here
good so far would love to see where this goes. also please stop using bold for system speaking as the tts just skips it.
I have reached chapter 43 and I love the story. My favourites are the ones where mc has no regard for the plot plus he the mc is going the technological way which is new for me. I only hope that after the new York invasion, you don't falter and lose your grip on the story. I have seen most fanfics start going down hill from there. Your update schedule is unstable but I am sure you can improve with time. World background is well laid out and mc is smart and doesn't make clearly stupid mistakes. Especially after taking NZTs, you showed an amazing contrast between the mc before and after taking it BTW. It is just a shame you settled on Gwen being the heroine. I would have loved to see mc later on in the story having Wanda maximoff as his love interest. In my mind it will fit your story with the male mc specialising in technology and the female heroine specialising in magic. This contrast would have made them a good couple in a sense. P.S: author you don't need to limit your mc too tightly on technology. If you can integrate other elements into technology like magic. It could allow the mc to wall out his own path which would be awesome to see. Of course these are only my suggestions, DONT lose your grip on your own story and keep up the good work
Love this fic, I was gonna post on the latest chapter but wasn’t sure if you would see it so I’m doing a review You should get him to create the partical accelerator that Cisco made to give Barry his speed back when zoom took his and in case you say that there is no speed force in marvel. Barry Allen was the one who created it when he was struck by lightning Pls do this😁😁😁😁🙏🙏🙏🙏
Acá el jefe maestro listo para leer esta obra de arte solo espero la creación uncs de 0 por favor quiero que shield y hydra se jodan XD autor me ancata tu novela sigue así von el buen trabajo
have read up to 23 chapters and I am Pleasantly surprised usually when you get Novels with systems they get overpowered very soon and chase girls This is much better work author🔥🔥Good luck and keep writing
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the main character is the bottom, he gives out the super-soldier serum like hot cakes... then was the point of creating it if he eventually makes everyone the same as him? What's the point of the serum?
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Enjoying the story and had hope that this could be a great fanfic but nahhhh I waste my time reading 34 chapters only for the author force the MC join the xmen lol dude doesn’t even have the Xgene but not his reputation is ruined, shield will monitor him 10000x more and so will hydra and other organizations…. Like no comments said it was a good idea and literally all of them said it’s awful lol but that’s the author for ya! Ruining a story and wasting readers time by making the story trash out of nowhere
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it's quite excellent, however it feels like the items are nerfed based on the plot which is nerve wracking but acceptable.... Only thing is the need for more frequent updates
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Hope to see you add chappie to this fanfic. Could be the mc's AI assistant. Picturing interactions like this with mc
Awesome novel, author can you make an auxiliary chapter for charector images and suits devloped by mc
Author for fun here! Of course I’m gonna rate my own novel high 😁👌 updates are consistent and I try to keep my story interesting so give it a try if you like Marvel and Sci-fi Tech