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The protagonist is an accidental time traveler - he didn't wait, didn't guess, only dreamed, but ended up in history, which he didn't pay much attention to. He was just lucky with his lineage.
Ryo is a new member of the Nara clan, from the Uzumaki lineage on his father's side, and it so happened that he was born not at the beginning of the known plot, but more than three decades and two world wars later. Now he has to figure out how to get out of this situation however he can.
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A beta MC that all the women seem to want to jump into and all the men want to MC their wives to. This novel is complete nonsense, it's a waste of my time
an excellent novel. an uzumaki/nara is a new and interesting combination. this is definitely worth checking out
Very unique. very interesting. it's slow paced, but still managed to hook you up. Just hope the chapter release would be fast too.
Slow development, 100 chapters and he's still a child, a very long training arc and counting!!. grammar is okay but names are confusing u need to think hard to understand who or what they're talking about. still looking forward to his growth maybe on 200 chapters based on its development, that is if the novel didn't drop.
I liked the story quite a bit then *spoiler* mc does Mito Uzamaki at 13yrs old I mean come on. I have lost all interest in continuing as this is a trend i see quite abit probably by the time this ends the mc would have every female character from before the third war including his own mom. Yea thats also heavily implied as well.
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the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story
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well i have to say i am really surprise with this ... mmm the situation and changes are really logical ... the talent and the efford and developed of mc until here is really good
I'm enjoying the story, it's been great so far. The only thing you need to watch out for is how often his moms name or family name are messed up. Otherwise, it's a great read.
story is very good at the beginning but it is starting get boaring to read after 100 chapters
GREAT STORY, THE AUTHOR IS NOT AFRAID TO MOVE WITH THE ORIGINAL PLOT (THANKS TO KAMI-SAMA) SO YOU WON'T READ A GENERIC STORY OF A SUPER OP MC THAT DOESN'T CHANGE THE MAIN STORY. THE GOAL OF THIS NOVEL IS TO CREATE AS MUCH BUTTERFLY EFFECT AS POSSIBLE, AND I DARE SAY THAT THE AUTHOR IS DOING IT WONDERFULLY. THERE IS ONLY ONE NEGATIVE POINT, THE CHAPTERS ARE SHORT. THANK YOU AP AUTHOR FOR THIS BRILLIANT WORK
Read good fanfic. One of the best for naruto fanfics although the story development is dreadfully slow, but slow development has its own charms Anyway I wanted to give it a 5 star bot some plot holes made me change the decision. But for a project this big I agree that some plotholes are inevitable. Anyway good read
Super mega cool. I like it very much............................................... ........................................................ ......
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I don't have the words, it's just incredible, I'm having a great time with your fanfic, just disappointed to have finished the available chapters
One of the best Naruto fanfiction and has huge growth potential. The characters are well developed, showing the time and effort that MC spends on increasing strength as well as developing his relationships with other characters.
Very very slow paced. I stopped reading at around chapter 130 and the MC is still a child. Reading this is like you're reading a lot of filler chapters. I also don't like the fact that the author uses Japanese names for jutsus. Every time a new jutsu is brought up, i have to google it.😩
the story's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read on this app but the problem is that the constant amount of grammar mistakes make it worse and ruin the immersion like they call the nine tails kurama, call root "ne", calling the MCs mum the wrong name and just swapping words around. author please proof read your chapters before you post them