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Morgan In Marvel With Type-Moon Gacha System
After her death, Morgan finds herself reincarnated in another world, completely different from the world she knows, a world where Magic doesn't exist.
Fortunately, she found that she seems to have gained a power that allows her to see the future, a different version of the future, or observe the parallel world, to be exact.
She saw all kinds of sufferance and danger that this world has but also all kinds of Artifacts; she realized that this world is as extraordinary as her world.
Thanks to her vision, she also understood that her power was because is what people call Mutants ability in this world; some individuals with different powers, and the biggest problem was that mutants in this world aren't safe, so she wasn't able to find a world where Mutants weren't exterminated in the end.
It was the same as in her world; their fate was already determined; she decided to resist destiny again and led the mutants to resist the fate of being exterminated.
It was then that she awakened a system called the Type-Moon Gacha System, a system that allowed her to obtain all the things from her past world.
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Uma das poucas histórias que usa a Morgan, Com uma proposta e ideia absurda de ótima e é uma delícia de ler. Desejo tudo de bom para você e sua história, que continue com o ótimo trabalho.
So, this is just my honest review here. The story and the premise has potential. However, the grammar, along with how the sentences are structured in the story, makes reading it a bit of a challenge. Personally, I'd recommend you use Grammarly or an AI to help polish your story, to make it more readable and cohesive to the audience. Also, if you don't already, get yourself a proof-reader (Or sometimes known as a Beta-reader) to proof read your chapters before release. Overall, I love the idea and hope you continue it. But I'd really like to see this story become polished so it can be perfectly enjoyed :)
Realistically, I want to become a good writer and the kind with a 20.000 collection and well my dream is to become a legend, so let me be cringe in my review