3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
So, this is just my honest review here. The story and the premise has potential. However, the grammar, along with how the sentences are structured in the story, makes reading it a bit of a challenge. Personally, I'd recommend you use Grammarly or an AI to help polish your story, to make it more readable and cohesive to the audience. Also, if you don't already, get yourself a proof-reader (Or sometimes known as a Beta-reader) to proof read your chapters before release. Overall, I love the idea and hope you continue it. But I'd really like to see this story become polished so it can be perfectly enjoyed :)
Uma das poucas histórias que usa a Morgan, Com uma proposta e ideia absurda de ótima e é uma delícia de ler. Desejo tudo de bom para você e sua história, que continue com o ótimo trabalho.
Realistically, I want to become a good writer and the kind with a 20.000 collection and well my dream is to become a legend, so let me be cringe in my review
So, this is just my honest review here. The story and the premise has potential. However, the grammar, along with how the sentences are structured in the story, makes reading it a bit of a challenge. Personally, I'd recommend you use Grammarly or an AI to help polish your story, to make it more readable and cohesive to the audience. Also, if you don't already, get yourself a proof-reader (Or sometimes known as a Beta-reader) to proof read your chapters before release. Overall, I love the idea and hope you continue it. But I'd really like to see this story become polished so it can be perfectly enjoyed :)
Uma das poucas histórias que usa a Morgan, Com uma proposta e ideia absurda de ótima e é uma delícia de ler. Desejo tudo de bom para você e sua história, que continue com o ótimo trabalho.
Realistically, I want to become a good writer and the kind with a 20.000 collection and well my dream is to become a legend, so let me be cringe in my review