/ Anime & Comics / Leon Greyrat: The Second Son - Mushoku Tensei OC
摘要
One day in the six-faced world, a newborn child, completely conscious of his surroundings, is taken in by a certain party of adventurers… the Fangs of the Black Wolf.
But not two years later, the party splits, and our main character, Leon, is greeted with the pleasant surprise of a younger brother, in the form of Rudeus Greyrat.
As Leon discovers more of the world and increases his strength to stave off any danger he could encounter, he comes to realize that in this world, and in his life, there is one thing he holds dear above all… family.
Arcs are released in batches.
Relationships (Spoilers):
OC x Sylphiette, Roxy, Eris, ?
Rudeus x Sara, ?, ?
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Status Update: Not dead, 7/15 first draft chapters finished. Harder to find motivation for the middle parts as it’s kind of filler/boring, but needed. The ending gonna bang though. Have time off for late December, so maybe by new years it’ll be done? I’m not sure. As always, thanks for reading.
This is one of the best fanfics of mushoku tensei. I like how the story,plot and emotion connects. I also like the character developments and interactions among the characters. I hope the author will finish it completely otherwise it will be very sad and disappointing if it gets dropped
just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc
I found out about this work through the repost and it fascinated me! I hope you continue writing, you are amazing!
amazing fanfiction top tier writing quality and very nicely fleshed out character interactions ... but its a bit too bland? idk how to say this but the plot follows extremely similar to the original mushoku tensei, with Leon basically being Rudeus 2.0, which takes away the element of surprise in a lot of situations ah ig thats why its a fanfiction in the first place nvm amazing story
God dam masterpiece! For sure the best fanfic of Mushoku Tensei in this app. It has long chapters, great pacing and the story flows really well. To me it is completely crazy that such fanfic of such quality isnt even in the top 20 of the power rankings. I beg the people that read and will read this to put your faith and your honesty and give your power stones to this.
It is very well written, I think the main character is more realistic than Rudy (there are some mistakes since I translated it from English to Turkish and read it, but I don't care)
An amazing read that I hope others will give a chance and also come to appreciate.
A fanfic with a good idea but a somewhat unsatisfactory development, I'm not referring to the writing, but to something that most writers fail at, the world building, in this fic it feels deficient, almost as if it had no ideas for the development and ran towards the canon events to avoid thinking about this and only alter what it wants, in the same way in my opinion if you are going to introduce new characters give them more than one chapter to get to know them better, after all if you kill someone and make it dramatic, you don't feel a connection and even less some sadness for someone you've only known in a few lines, explore more the fact that he began to live with the group even years before the events, how this can change the group and the repercussions of it and don't just jump in time to the part that suits you, I hope these things don't stop you, keep trying, you have a great writing base and good ideas.
We’ve chatted a bit on Wattpad but figured I’d say it here as well, I absolutely love your story and the way you write. I’m glad you also mass release chapters since it helps with cliffhangers. Continue doing your best work I love this story!
Honestly one of the best FF iv ever read. Its the same world you love but taken along a different route because of an OC mc that doesn't have any past life memories. later on its hinted at for who he really is and id say it fits in with the original world very well. The author is truthful to the original characters and portrays them in a way that I think the original author would. Some of the story beats are the same but id say it makes sense since if you have read the original you'd know the world is on a set path. As for update stability the author updates whole arcs at a time so while you wont get daily updates you will every few months get a ton of large chapters that bring an arc to a satisfying stopping point until the next arc releases. Overall id recommend this to anyone who is a fan of the original Mushoku Tensei.
Abra una segunda parte??? Es la primera vez que me gusta tanto una novela y estoy ansioso por ver si abra una continuacion jajaja [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story is basically the perfect example of a Reudeus replacement. It is executed almost flawlessly and I had a great time reading it. The chapters are a good length and the character development is done in a way that provokes interest in each character. My only complaint is that the Mc gets a little emotional at the end of the story. Overall, 4.6/5
This is the best mushoku tensei fanfic i ever read, the character emotion is so well developed, the story pace is also great, although it's mostly following the original storyline, it doesn't make the story boring at all, the change the author make still within logical reason and it's actually make it interesting. I just hope that this story can continue till the end, all i can say, good luck to the author and keep make the story
Arc 6 is now out. On the future, I have just begun an internship that takes off 12 hours from my day thanks to taking the bus (I know... I want to die), because of this, as well as me dabbling in an original story, the next arc will likely take quite a while compared to the other two. But then again, if inspiration strikes, I find it quite easy to write a lot, so I won't promise anything. Thanks for reading :)