摘要
Alex and Zibi two best friends died in a car crash. GOD is surprised that something like that happened. Soon he discovers that something is messing with the free will of people, other souls are disappearing in mysterious crashes. That means that false gods are planning an uprising. GOD became annoyed that bugs appeared in his perfect world system, so he implements antivirus, but it is slightly too late and Angels cannot do much, because they are bound by their nature and codex. GOD gives the task of cleansing the world from bugs to Alex and Zibi.
In short, gods, demons, other worlds.
GOD Protects.
Author note: Author is not responsible for any brain or eye damaged. This story may have some strong words. I am still learning so my grammar may not be perfect You have been warned.
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
**Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters** Constructive Criticism: I suggest you edit the following from chapter 1 "That smile would scare would stop a baby from crying and scare any kind of criminal on death row", honestly IDK how to best go about correcting this, but it is crazy confusing for us native English speakers.;,;. You went 3 weeks w/o an update earlier on after your update rate average seemed to be no more than a week or two apart, and then you have not updated in the last two months? I feel you should try your best to keep this story going and make your updates happen at a regular pace.;,;. I feel both your characters and world background are a bit week, the characters feel like they were taken out of a video game such as Minecraft, whereas the character does not have much of a story of it's own.;,;. Positive Feedback: I feel like your story development is strong despite all your weaknesses... I just hope you can strengthen your strengths and learn from so to strengthen your weaknesses.;,;. Personal Feedback: I'm sorry, but this story is not my cup of tea... I will not be continuing to read this novel, I however will implore you to keep up the good work for the sake of your fans.;,;. Score: SoU 3/5 SD 5/5 Rest 4/5
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Okay so I've read ten chapters and up till now the story is really interesting but you need a little bit enhancement in your story's background otherwise the writing quality has a few glitches which can be improved by editing a little. The story development is so-so. Going to add this in my library-Keep writing! ^^ x
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