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Anime was fun but the reality is much more serious.
No one is Good or Bad. They are what benefits them the most.
Corrupted Konoha System.
Hard childhood and manipulative third Hokage.
Hiding from Danzo and his root while getting strong.
This is not an Anime any more no. Its the real life and every little thing matter.
Thank god I have a system.
Need to get strong because its the survival of the fittest.
I do not own Naruto or any other character name I use in this book beside my main character and the one I create.
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This is just one of those thousands OP MC fanfics where the MC has everything figured out before he is even born For example Itachi Obito and Zetsu can definitely sense a 8 year old using jutsu And if finding root base was so easy then it would have been a tourist attraction at this point Not to mention he is just casually talking about using Hiraishin etc There was a reason why only Minato and Tobirama were albe to learn it not some 8 year old Zero focus on the character development the MC has zero personlity
poor execution of plot. standard statutory r@pe and pedophilia grooming. low intelligence mc and author. nonsense system that slows the pacing and has multiple plot holes in just about every other chapter.
Story is boring following too many tropes, mc is a pepo by grooming ino, author destroyed team 7 by adding ino to the team. Many plot holes. System is trash and without it mc would be nothing. He’s able to trick obito with little to planning, plot is not consistent, scaling is out of thrown out the window. I’m giving it a one star, because author said ino and mc are just friends and not even the next chapter ino and mc become a “couple”. Mc name is kirito no need to explain. Grammar is alright, but nothing to write about though. Character development is weird and mc is way to irrational. Language use for system is off like [100x critical hit] but mc never attacked anyone or was attacked, it some type of reward multiplier which is just way to op. Author makes mc op but nerfs him the next chapter, like 100x rasengan damage but it doesn’t even kill anyone other than mob characters. Last but not least let me reiterate mc is a pepo/groomer.
I like how this MC has a brain unlike other fanfics, and doesn't use others for his benefit. I hope you can keep updating the fanfic. Good luck! 🍀
The stencil system is already good enough, adding the most absurd 100x power there is to the story. The subject of books with 100x power has to enter a dead end at a certain point.
If you have a brain, this fanfic is not for you. It's more or less a good wet dream of every brain dead simp. 1 star is actually too much for this rubbish
Another overpowered protagonist and not only has a system that gives him crazy powers development sucks and is quite intrusive at times , , , , , , , , , ,
trash MC. he thinks big, train big, small action when he got strong. only do the talking. may have 2 personality
Before you start reading this fic I warn you that the MC is OP and the label (weak to strong) is false. The title of this fic is also fake, it doesn't have anything resembling a template, it's just a system that gives him a lot of powers that Minato Namikaze has and doesn't have. The author always makes the MC fight without using all of his abilities and powers and the battles last 3 or 5 chapters. Great possibilities of HAREM and if not INO and an OC that the author created in a journey that lasted from chapter 100 to 162 that apart from obtaining "conqueror haki" and Fūinjutsu from Mito Uzumaki himself added an OC UZUMAKI as a love interest, completely eliminating to Karin Uzumaki and the trip to the past does not affect her future at all. After returning and starting Naruto Shippuden, the author weakens the MC again and in the end takes away the system and everything he obtained. In short, this starts off bad and gets worse over time. There may also be trips to other worlds or a crossing of worlds. And these are important examples, then there are more details to continue mentioning how bad this FAN-FICS is.
You should definitely read this review. It started well he made him overpowered somewhere till mid but then when the time travel/alternate reality arc started author started to make him weak even though all of his enemies were far more weaker then himself BUT the thing that forced me to drop and told me this iwas a complete waste of time is when he TOLD Mianto after reviving him the truth about his origins and about how this world is just a MANGA so please do not waste your time this story and author are not worth your time
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The idea is nice, but the amount of freebie he got from the system is crazy, might as well give him supersaiyan, it lazy writting and a cheap way to power up, it invalidates hard work and a spit on the world that the original author of naruto created
If I could I would rate writing quality as -100.It is awful.Characters don't have 'character' they are just names.They don't feel like characters they are like NPC's.I am sorry but I can't tell anything else it is just bad.
Its like the author is trynna be the reincarnation of light but completely disregarding the fact that the high ups of the village are highly trained and powerful shinobi
HAREM! HAREM!HAREM! Idiot Author put that tag in before fooling people into reading this...
i don't like the system.less interaction of characters. boringino Being in Team 7 which does not make sense at all. beside Sasuke was put in team 7 because Kakashi has a sharingan.
Well, I stopped watching when the writer made Haku a girl and created a plot that Haku is a slave and he wants to save her. The model for heroes in villain novels, where the hero thinks everything he does is right and is ridiculously confident in his intelligence.
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Ok. Se você é aquele leitor que gosta de clichês, esta história é pra você. Ainda mais com um sistema.
Others may like it, but not for me. He is the son of Minato, and get his template. Rather than being a genius, he got 1000x worst, in exchange for getting 100x the original strength of the technique he wanted to learn. He hides his strength to not let the higher ups suspicious about him. But they know that he is training all the time, isn't that suspicious as a son of one of the most genius ninja in konoha's history? Yeah he hide it even though for me he doesn't need to because it's not unexpected, especially he is the son of Minato and not a jinjuriki. Not my cup of tea. ..