I've been on Webnovel(and other platforms of course) for years and from quality work to wish fulfillment works I read almost EVERYTHING on Webnovel.This is one of the best fanfiction in this site.Characters feel like they are alive.They are not words in an Ff.Just like almost everyone in this site everyone seems to forget that Good Dialogues turns ordinary stories into amazing stories.Nothing happenes story wise or action wise but so far the story is Good. Keep up the good work please.
There aren't a lot of good TWD fanfics and this is very good.Mc is not an idiot so far and he thinks and does logical things.Survival being his first priority is smart and as you know there aren't a lot of MC's that are smart.Plase keep up the good work.Thanks a lot man.
He just creates an AI in 4 hours with 1 computer?? And he says that it is more advanced then any AI??? I get that he is from 2059 or whatever but that's the most illogical thing I've ever heard.Where are the servers of Iris? Where is it's processing parts? She can just hack anything like Shield and stuff in a couple of hours?? That 1 paragraph where Iris was created was the equivalent of like 5-10 chapters and you just skipped it? The story was going good and you suddenly destroyed it.I'll keep reading because it still has potential but I hope it doesn't happen again.
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+1
Frankly, I want him to enter the world of "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei," though.
Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
Anime & Comics · akikan40
+1 This is the only good choice.The others are really bad for a lot of reasons.
1) Natasha Romanoff
A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
Movies · Story_Teller_229
Okay man I'll read then.Please don't misunderstand, the story is good,characters have depth to them and feel geniune.It's just I can't tolerate bad characters you know like scum,evil,degenerate characters.Other than that the story is good.It is progressing very well.Keep up the good work 👍
Mass release.I didn't like the MC from the start but the story was good.But then the MC suddenly became so much disgusting(like real disgusting,revolting) that I couldn't keep reading.
For immortality there is a filler arc(i think) that has something called Stone of Gelel on Naruto.Look it up if you don't know maybe you could use that if it is feasible.
Naruto: The Perfect Hokage
Anime & Comics · chaotic_overlord