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"haaa, nothing new coming" ???
"damm, writer strikes" ???
Max cursed at the news of writer strikes news, cause its delaying his favourite movies from releasing,
Suddenly he heard a shout but pay it no heed until...
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"hey, Kid watch out!" I helplessly watched a teenage kid moment away from just truck crashing into him, but i still tried reaching out to him but..( Random passerby)
#screeeech# #Bam#
"Huh, what- cough i-is t-this" Max looks at the clear blue sky, feeling pain all over his body.
But soon realisation dawned him
"I guess, I won't be able to watch my favs any more....." Max closed his eyes thinking it's over but is it....
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This story has an interesting beginning, at first I didn't give it much consideration because I thought it was a common fanfic, but I quickly realized that it is underestimated, the plot has character growth and many interactions with well-constructed characters, in addition to the skills of the system and the actions of the mc are very well thought out, of course it has some holes, but I consider them necessary because from my point of view, they are not important and perhaps they will be more recognized in the future, the truth is that this fanfic deserves some 400 chapters because of how good and well created it is
Honestly this is mediocre at best. The English is not very good and the protagonist and characters feel like lifeless cutouts. The protagonist in particular has no clear noticeable trait other than incompetence and lack of mental fortitude and thought.
Novel will probably be dropped soon. Considering the Overpowered MC, inconsistent Power set, and abilities from all over the place, This story will get harder for the author to continue.Also, from the Way the words and sentences are used, one could see it the writings of a newbie.It's good, considering he's probably a beginner who's out to have fun writing a whole new story, but down the line, even he himself will get bored or confused on how to go forward.The most off putting aspect of this is the World Traveling. When I saw him leaving the Marvel world, I simply dropped the book. It ain't worth it
It started good then I became a multiple MC story when he created all of the clones and I just couldn't get myself to continue the story with all the interactions with the Marvel characters through clones
it's a brain dead fanfiction . too much useless details the MC is overpowered yet useless. the story is anywhere but marvel . there is no story development as main marvel universe hasn't gone anywhere it's just world hopping. I tried to be generous rating this.
The book is missing alot of details The book is missing world details Everything just jumping from point to point Everything feels rushed But still good overall
The English is broken. The punctuation and grammar is complete garbage. Character and system details are not consistent. The system itself is a hussy as well. --- Basically, it's a train wreck whose only redeeming feature is the ideas behind the story.
It is a pretty fun read. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. I feel like by just improving on them, this fanfic will grow. I like the power set and while mc is powerful, he isn't yet op, although it might feel like it. Honestly, I wish you would focus a bit on background and world-building because we still haven't met tony stark even though he invested in mcs company and the mc is a potts. Also, what happened to the hydra spy that is his maid or something(I forgot her position)? Overall its a fun story and its a fanfic so...five stars
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The story has a lot of potential but it feels a bit to hurried and the grammar is a bit off but otherwise okay. I’ve only read 16 chapters and I feel that a few things have been left out without being mentioned again.
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over powered spineless chicken that even when dealing with weak grunts still acts so pathetic, the dude asked for a pokemon egg (it can be any pokemon) and he just agreed to call him when he gets one again.
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this novel has Tom from Tom & Jerry............................................................................................................................
I was hoping this story would be good but it's not. the writing quality need some improvement the story development feels rushed, character design feels boring and one dimensional I will compliment the author with the update stability. I wish the author good luck in their future endeavors
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for me good story .................................................................
is good but i hope you will not add harem in the story because the harem thing usually make author lost focus it will end up bad somehow....................