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A person with X-gene found herself being experimented in oscorp. And being experimented everyday, let's see how she escapes.
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Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.
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I think the main problem with this story is that most of the characters are terrible, Alice is just a massive pushover, Felicia just makes the story really uncomfortable and shes pushy and gives stalker vibes.
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Book has been reallllyyy good so far…. Hope author continues and doesn’t drop🙏🙏🙏
This is really a unique work than other fiction, just need to improve the flow of the story