/ Anime & Comics / I got reincarnated in the world of One Punch Man
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Warning: The story is exceedingly dark and contains explicit mature and gore scenes.
Don't be surprised if the name of the main character in this fanfiction is the same as that of the main character in my other fanfiction.
Because they are the same person, but I made it appear that there is another multiverse in which my main character reincarnated into various Anime worlds
Q: Rather than having to separate them, why didn't the Author combine them into a single Fanfiction story?
A: It would be extremely inconvenient and confusing. Do you really want to? For example, reading fanfiction where the main character travels to another Anime world every few tens of chapters.
Q: Rather than using the same main character, why doesn't the Author create a variety of unique main characters for each fanfiction she creates?
A: I genuinely think it will be troublesome and exhausting. After all, I want my main character to have the same outlook and nature.
I have a Patreon where I post many NSFW illustrations of various fanfiction characters I've created, and you can also get access to 20+ early chapters ahead of time; your support is greatly appreciated.
patre0n.com/Instamoist
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Its really good but the whole seducing my mother thing just made me drop it. he already has female MC's around to seduce and use why add his mom? if it was a step mom then ok but biological? its just of putting for me and it kills his coolness factor for me.
5stars because of cover photo btw can u share that photo need for my future research.......
Current chapter 12 the premise is there but the execution is very poor. I'm finding it very hard to get emotionally invested in the main character. I would strongly recommend the author to flesh out more character interactions and not have the beer bone romantic interaction alone. It really feels like wish fulfilment. It's readable but not very enjoyable. My opinion could change but that is what I think for now.
En autor no explica absolutamente nada desde el principio, Ni el poder del MC ni siquiera una imagen de cómo se ve MC , solo la descripción más típica de MC genérico pelo blanco y ojos rojos , también MC es bipolar?
Excellent . I hope you can update this novel regularly Arthur . ______________________________________________________________________________
Take in mind that I usually don’t like 1st person writing. First for the good parts: it has a decent premise and has good plot. Bad parts: First is the horrible choice in what,1-3, person the story should be written. Throughout the novel the author switches between 1st, 2nd, and 3rd person. The author also seems to be writing in third person and then just replacing all the he with I. It turns out very striking when the mc is talking about himself in an outsiders(3rd persons) perspective but sticks with I throughout. The author also likes to have sentences describing scenes with you(2nd person) perspective and then follows with a 1st person sarcastic comment. It is so bad that I had to stop early. Character design is kinda influenced by the above problem. The mc seems very apathetic and distant. This is further exacerbated by the seemingly sarcastic comments made by the mc along with the serious 4th wall breaking moments. It really takes a lot away from the story and made me drop the book after the 5th time seeing it happen. Note to author: Stick with 1 perspective. Don’t assume that the readers know everything about the one piece series. Don’t make mc comments different from how you describe the world. If u describe, for example, a teleportation as flashy and unexpected( again with the sudden perspective change) don’t follow it up with the mc saying it is normal. Who is the mc talking to? The reader, obviously, but keep ur stories contained in the story!!! Don’t try to comment on imaginary, in the mcs perspective, people. It just drives me to believe the mc is psychotic. This isn’t helped by the attitude and personality traits u decided to give ur mc.
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Auteur dit que son histoire est très intelligente mais je disais que de la stupidité rentrer dans un monde pour refuser de parler aux personnages qui sont dans ce monde c'est juste ridicule surtout quand il est fort le personnage bref cinq chapitres très très long à lire un calvaire
bro like to talk to himself and out loud a lot, plus super edgy grin and smirk🗿
Ok... lets start. MC is VERY annoying, chaotic evil and does whatever he wants without regards to anything. He arrived to one punch man with a system to collect women, not love them, but collect them. So its not really up to my tastes. MC even had to hold back killing Lily from the blizzard group and held back just because she was a system target. Villian dosnt really fits this mc. Evil fits more.
Auteur psycho , violeur [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This is not Harem, it should be called the life of mosquito girl and the mc, in the almost 100 chapters the story focuses on the mosquito girl and the mc besides that from chapter 50 to 98 under the quality of both the story and the amount of words per chapter and became quite bland.
Current chapter 12 the premise is there but the execution is very poor. I'm finding it very hard to get emotionally invested in the main character. I would strongly recommend the author to flesh out more character interactions and not have the beer bone romantic interaction alone. It really feels like wish fulfilment. It's readable but not very enjoyable. My opinion could change but that is what I think for now.
It's so ducking boring 🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🌞🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🌞🎃🎃🎃🌞🌞🎃🌞🌞🎃🌞🎃🎃🌞🎃🌞🌞🌞🌞🎃🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🎃🌞🌞🌞
Gave it the benefit of doubt. unfortunately ended up dissapointed. As others mention MC is plainly unlikable. I mean some character development maybe? Nope, I mean its doable in some gray dark MCs but this one just doesn't cut it. Reminds me of a more edgy cringe sasuke with mix of psycho. You can give a try but youve being warned.
Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
bro, they deleted your aot fic, will you repost it or drop it? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]