/ Anime & Comics / I am a Rich Second-Generation in One Piece
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Seth traversed to the One Piece World. His identity is a Rich Second Generation and he is also Vivi's fiancee. Fortunately, he can make choices to get corresponding rewards. Note: This is my own take on the rich second-generation villain genre.
【Ding! Vivi wants to break the engagement! Please make a choice! 】
【Choice 1: Be the embodiment of licking dog and apologize to her. Reward: ‘Master Level Martial Arts’! 】
【Choice 2: Resolutely retire from engagement, refuse to lick the dog! Reward: ‘God-level Drawing Skills’! 】
Who says that his destiny is to be trampled by the villain and protagonist of this world?
Notes: The first two chapters are pretty much the same as Gao-fushuai villain as it was the one that heavily inspired this fanfic.
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it feels like im reading a chine translation with expressions like"licking dog". the mc makes way too many dumb choices. like trying to sell literature in one piece to make money instead of just using his god lvl drawing skills to auction his paintings through his father anonymously. then he sells enhanced armor to the marines like they are not going to try and monopolize such an asset
Honestly it's just a copy of another Chinese type story, I already read with the same story and joke, except this one has a one piece skin. 🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️
It looks like a Chinese novel with all the cliches there are, the skills that the system gave him are very convenient so they don't seem random, the system has a better personality than the mc, I'll give him a chance because he's one piece.
Though you have uploaded only a few chapters now I am already loving it. (I love your Naruto Fan- Fiction) . The MC has a unique background and is smart. The MC has a unique Devil Fruit. I hope he remains a Merchant and becomes the richest as well as the strongest man in the world. . Thanks for sharing this with us Author-san. Please upload more chapters. I wish I could give you more than 5 stars.
good premise, bad execution. a wasted opportunity. system talks too much. some inconsistencies. i couldn't read much. maybe it gets good later on, but it doesn't seem like it. you can still give it a try.
Nice book. I will like some more chapters. Also is he going to be a pirate or a merchant because I will like him to be a merchant cause I have only seen 2 books were the mc is merchant in one piece but they are all dropped. Correct number of stars now.
I'm a massive fan of your other novels. ( the side character and teacher one ). so obviously I'll support you in this as well. I already like where this is going since the mc is not bootlicking and has a decent head on his shoulders. nice choice on the devil fruit. always thought it had tremendous potential. hope the chapters are a little longer but you do you. keep up the amazing work.💙
Unoroginal idea, kind of interesting but would get boring very fast if it’s not writting at great quality. Grammar and vocabulary is like a chinese novel. Not much else to be said
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This story is great and unique. A lot of gamer stories are getting boring because they level up generally the same but yours is different. Haven’t seen a fic go back to Alabasta days. Nice backstory and interesting to see what comes next
Read till Chapter 10. Writing quality - 5/5 - Great quality of writing. Story Development - 4/5 - The first few chapters had a lot of similarities to a Chines MTL novel I read, in that novel the MC gets transmigrated to a rich second generation villian where he has to make same choices that was shown here, in this ff, a) be a licking dog and b) refuse the pre-arranged marriage. But Author of this ff seriously improved the premise a lot when compared to that CN. Great work. Character Design - 5/5 - Decent character Design, nothing much to say except that it seems similar to a visual novel. Updating Stability - 5/5 - Decent stability of updates. World background - 5/5 - It is One piece world, one of my favourites. Overall - 4.8/5.0 - Keep up the good work Author 👍
Me agrada.... Es mucho mejor que otras novelas que leí... Y el harem no es tan fastidioso como otros... Así que supongo que está bien... Me sorprende que haya elegido ser odiado por Hancock... Pero Sta bien... Ya me harté de los fics en los que Boa Hancock se enamora del MC siempre... Me aburre... Así que respirar un aire nuevo lo hace mejor
update pls 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
.....is it dropped? .. .. .. . . ... .. .. .. . . ..... .. . .. .. .. .. .... .. ... .. .. .. . .. .. . .. . ... .. ... ..
fun and entertaining to read even if it has its own flaw. sometimes the choices of the system are kind of forced. but overall fun read. i hope more action with the girls. yamato and hancok plz >_<
stupid MC makes bad choices. Kind of Chinese like novel with the thought process to. Just read the other comments you will understand more. Also MC makes the worst choices ever.
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An interesting premise that is ruined by the MC. The MC is a warlord of the sea that is trained by Zephyr and Garp but is still a major simp and pushover for everyone.
Supongo que no es para mí, me estoy cayendo debido a las decisiones poco realistas tomadas por el autor, me refiero a quién en su sano juicio elegiría 10000 puntos en algo tan inútil y lo actualizaría a SSS mientras el resto de sus estadísticas están en D incluso. La gramática decayó, se volvió bastante aburrida a medida que avanza la historia.
Not for me i guess, i am dropping became of the unrealistic decisions made by the author i mean who in the right mind would choose 10000 points in something as useless as charm and upgrade it to SSS while his rest of the stats are in D even when you know someone is trying to kill you. PS. Giving 3 stars because its free to read