Reviews of I am a Rich Second-Generation in One Piece by Rysangel - Webnovel

41評論

4.3

  • 寫作品質
  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景

與他人分享您的想法

寫檢討
Alex081904

update pls 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

2yr
查看0條回復
ReinhardVanAstrea

Me agrada.... Es mucho mejor que otras novelas que leí... Y el harem no es tan fastidioso como otros... Así que supongo que está bien... Me sorprende que haya elegido ser odiado por Hancock... Pero Sta bien... Ya me harté de los fics en los que Boa Hancock se enamora del MC siempre... Me aburre... Así que respirar un aire nuevo lo hace mejor

2yr
查看0條回復
Ray_02

.....is it dropped? .. .. .. . . ... .. .. .. . . ..... .. . .. .. .. .. .... .. ... .. .. .. . .. .. . .. . ... .. ... ..

2yr
查看0條回復
Valfren

fun and entertaining to read even if it has its own flaw. sometimes the choices of the system are kind of forced. but overall fun read. i hope more action with the girls. yamato and hancok plz >_<

2yr
查看0條回復
NowGoWithTheFlow

stupid MC makes bad choices. Kind of Chinese like novel with the thought process to. Just read the other comments you will understand more. Also MC makes the worst choices ever.

2yr
查看0條回復
Bob_Uchiha_XD

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
查看0條回復
Shibaken

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
查看0條回復
Ayer52
LV 12 Badge

An interesting premise that is ruined by the MC. The MC is a warlord of the sea that is trained by Zephyr and Garp but is still a major simp and pushover for everyone.

2yr
查看0條回復
Jonatan_david

Supongo que no es para mí, me estoy cayendo debido a las decisiones poco realistas tomadas por el autor, me refiero a quién en su sano juicio elegiría 10000 puntos en algo tan inútil y lo actualizaría a SSS mientras el resto de sus estadísticas están en D incluso. La gramática decayó, se volvió bastante aburrida a medida que avanza la historia.

2yr
查看0條回復
Milk_Strawberry

Not bad, character design is ok?as for power I guess it has many flaws,writing quality I would put ⭐⭐⭐, world background is a ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ definitely, the only disappointment is the updating stability.

2yr
查看0條回復
Medalha

exp..........................................................................................................................................

2yr
查看0條回復
Medalha

exp..........................................................................................................................................

2yr
查看0條回復
kires
LV 2 Badge

😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎

img
2yr
查看0條回復
francisco_monsalve

En general no es mala la historia ni la trama, pero la forma en el que el personaje se expresa y como el sistema prácticamente le da todo en bandeja es algo .... Cliché.

2yr
查看0條回復
Rizki_Caturianto

A really really great story!!! I love it 😍😍😍 It's different from any One Piece fanfiction I ever read.. I love how MC have art DF, that means he must be creative to max utilized his DF power... Can't wait to read next chapter.. Great job author san 👍👍👍😁😁😁

2yr
查看0條回復
Param_Doshi

Awesome storyline! Looking forward to the next chapters. Hope you won't stop mid-way. That's the only request I have, I guess. Looking forward to the next few chapters. Hope you can write a bit long chapters. Otherwise awesome storymap mate.

2yr
查看0條回復
Alex081904

Perfect . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

2yr
查看0條回復
A9B
LV 4 Badge

great. fun. ............................................................................... ...............................................................................

2yr
查看0條回復
DaoistKZI6j6

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
JoJo_Soni

good premise, bad execution. a wasted opportunity. system talks too much. some inconsistencies. i couldn't read much. maybe it gets good later on, but it doesn't seem like it. you can still give it a try.

2yr
查看0條回復
INVADER_WEST

I just discovered this story, and I love every chapter!! 10/10 The story unfolds well and without seeming unnatural,[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
Vaassaav

Honestly it's just a copy of another Chinese type story, I already read with the same story and joke, except this one has a one piece skin. 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

2yr
查看1條回復
LukeMorningStar

♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

揭示劇透
2yr
查看0條回復
Shnh_Kusuma_3576

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
WhiskeredCat

😉😚😐😉😄🥇😚😄😀🥇😄😀🥇😄😄🥇😀😚😉🤗😚😉😄🤔🥇🥇🤔🥇🤔😄😄🤔🥇😄🥇😉😉😐🤗😉😚😚😉🤗😉😚🤗😉😚🤗😉😚🤗🤗😚😉🤗😚😉🥇🥇😄😚🤗😉🥇😚☝️🥇😚😄😚😉😍😚😉😍😚🥇😍😉😚🤗🥇😄😚😄🥇😄😉😚🤗😄😚🥇😄😃😀😃😐😄😄😐😄😉😐🤗🤗😐🤗🤗😚🥇

2yr
查看0條回復
Konoyaro789

its like reading cn young master genre but in one piece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
Kevinsan3141

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
Rysangel

Just an author reviewing his own story[img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

2yr
查看4條回復
Fito
LV 5 Badge

It looks like a Chinese novel with all the cliches there are, the skills that the system gave him are very convenient so they don't seem random, the system has a better personality than the mc, I'll give him a chance because he's one piece.

2yr
查看0條回復
MrIIIo

Unoroginal idea, kind of interesting but would get boring very fast if it’s not writting at great quality. Grammar and vocabulary is like a chinese novel. Not much else to be said

2yr
查看0條回復
Alex081904

update pls 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

2yr
查看0條回復
ReinhardVanAstrea

Me agrada.... Es mucho mejor que otras novelas que leí... Y el harem no es tan fastidioso como otros... Así que supongo que está bien... Me sorprende que haya elegido ser odiado por Hancock... Pero Sta bien... Ya me harté de los fics en los que Boa Hancock se enamora del MC siempre... Me aburre... Así que respirar un aire nuevo lo hace mejor

2yr
查看0條回復
Ray_02

.....is it dropped? .. .. .. . . ... .. .. .. . . ..... .. . .. .. .. .. .... .. ... .. .. .. . .. .. . .. . ... .. ... ..

2yr
查看0條回復
Valfren

fun and entertaining to read even if it has its own flaw. sometimes the choices of the system are kind of forced. but overall fun read. i hope more action with the girls. yamato and hancok plz >_<

2yr
查看0條回復
NowGoWithTheFlow

stupid MC makes bad choices. Kind of Chinese like novel with the thought process to. Just read the other comments you will understand more. Also MC makes the worst choices ever.

2yr
查看0條回復
Bob_Uchiha_XD

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
查看0條回復
Shibaken

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
查看0條回復
Ayer52
LV 12 Badge

An interesting premise that is ruined by the MC. The MC is a warlord of the sea that is trained by Zephyr and Garp but is still a major simp and pushover for everyone.

2yr
查看0條回復
Jonatan_david

Supongo que no es para mí, me estoy cayendo debido a las decisiones poco realistas tomadas por el autor, me refiero a quién en su sano juicio elegiría 10000 puntos en algo tan inútil y lo actualizaría a SSS mientras el resto de sus estadísticas están en D incluso. La gramática decayó, se volvió bastante aburrida a medida que avanza la historia.

2yr
查看0條回復
Milk_Strawberry

Not bad, character design is ok?as for power I guess it has many flaws,writing quality I would put ⭐⭐⭐, world background is a ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ definitely, the only disappointment is the updating stability.

2yr
查看0條回復
Medalha

exp..........................................................................................................................................

2yr
查看0條回復
Medalha

exp..........................................................................................................................................

2yr
查看0條回復
kires
LV 2 Badge

😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😎😎

img
2yr
查看0條回復
francisco_monsalve

En general no es mala la historia ni la trama, pero la forma en el que el personaje se expresa y como el sistema prácticamente le da todo en bandeja es algo .... Cliché.

2yr
查看0條回復
Rizki_Caturianto

A really really great story!!! I love it 😍😍😍 It's different from any One Piece fanfiction I ever read.. I love how MC have art DF, that means he must be creative to max utilized his DF power... Can't wait to read next chapter.. Great job author san 👍👍👍😁😁😁

2yr
查看0條回復
Param_Doshi

Awesome storyline! Looking forward to the next chapters. Hope you won't stop mid-way. That's the only request I have, I guess. Looking forward to the next few chapters. Hope you can write a bit long chapters. Otherwise awesome storymap mate.

2yr
查看0條回復
Alex081904

Perfect . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

2yr
查看0條回復
A9B
LV 4 Badge

great. fun. ............................................................................... ...............................................................................

2yr
查看0條回復
DaoistKZI6j6

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
JoJo_Soni

good premise, bad execution. a wasted opportunity. system talks too much. some inconsistencies. i couldn't read much. maybe it gets good later on, but it doesn't seem like it. you can still give it a try.

2yr
查看0條回復
INVADER_WEST

I just discovered this story, and I love every chapter!! 10/10 The story unfolds well and without seeming unnatural,[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
Vaassaav

Honestly it's just a copy of another Chinese type story, I already read with the same story and joke, except this one has a one piece skin. 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

2yr
查看1條回復
LukeMorningStar

♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

揭示劇透
2yr
查看0條回復
Shnh_Kusuma_3576

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
WhiskeredCat

😉😚😐😉😄🥇😚😄😀🥇😄😀🥇😄😄🥇😀😚😉🤗😚😉😄🤔🥇🥇🤔🥇🤔😄😄🤔🥇😄🥇😉😉😐🤗😉😚😚😉🤗😉😚🤗😉😚🤗😉😚🤗🤗😚😉🤗😚😉🥇🥇😄😚🤗😉🥇😚☝️🥇😚😄😚😉😍😚😉😍😚🥇😍😉😚🤗🥇😄😚😄🥇😄😉😚🤗😄😚🥇😄😃😀😃😐😄😄😐😄😉😐🤗🤗😐🤗🤗😚🥇

2yr
查看0條回復
Konoyaro789

its like reading cn young master genre but in one piece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
Kevinsan3141

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
查看0條回復
Rysangel

Just an author reviewing his own story[img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

2yr
查看4條回復
Fito
LV 5 Badge

It looks like a Chinese novel with all the cliches there are, the skills that the system gave him are very convenient so they don't seem random, the system has a better personality than the mc, I'll give him a chance because he's one piece.

2yr
查看0條回復
MrIIIo

Unoroginal idea, kind of interesting but would get boring very fast if it’s not writting at great quality. Grammar and vocabulary is like a chinese novel. Not much else to be said

2yr
查看0條回復
next page