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Arthur finds himself reincarnated into the world of Harry Potter and awakens a powerful Gacha System. He begins his new life by acquiring a phoenix as his pet and spending time playing Quidditch with his girlfriend Cho Chang, reading books in the library with Hermione, or searching for the rare Crumple-Horned Snorkack with Luna.
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Just not worth it, the MC is a grown man reincarnated into a young body and fawns over another 11 year to the point of chasing after her and joining the same house as her, in other words forced romance. There are other flaws but is the only glaring one to me which just made me stop.
This book is just a translation, and the ’author’ doesn’t even give credit! So, although it is a good translation, it is a horrible fanfiction and novel.
This is a translation of a chinese novel named hogwarts the way of the dharma. but overall good work its an good translation. keep it up :).
Weak, pointless and vapid plot, interpersonal relationships that feel forced, I tried to read and disregard these glaring flaws, but I couldn't, it just gets worse. Just a little parenthesis, even if the Gaunt Family was famous, Voldy killed the last descendant in his sixth year of hogwarts, this is back in the 40s, 50 years later, grandparents and parents may know something about it, but a bunch of children and teenagers who don't care about history know about it easily? this was one of the fakest parts for me.
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You know this novel is already on Webnovel, it's called Harry Potter: Card Drawing System. And this is a chinese novel The story is exactly the same only the name of the main character is changed.
It started off okay with the usual Chinese translation common problems but whatever it is better translated than most but the mc simps for a girl that he met literally met one time so hard that he made the sorting hat change his house after the hat already shouted out slytherin he kept begging to be put in to ravenclaw just because he was simping for Cho Chang who he again had only met one time it was just to much for me plus the creepy ranch between 11 year olds I highly recommend reading something else
DROPED??????????????..?.....?. Estou curioso Autor você ainda vai continuar o romance ou não?
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I am reviewing only the translation, not the story... the story itself is average but readable that is enough for me... this novel is already translated on Webnovel under the name Harry Potter: Card Drawing Wizard which is also the name of the original, translator here changed the name of the novel for whatever reason... Still, the translation quality is incomparable as I originally wanted to read the first one because it is already translated entirely but when I started comparing them then I realized that the translation is trash... only slightly better than MTL...
Fast-paced storytelling. Very smooth and direct. Very suitable for those who are not into 'world building' and 'detail management', expressly to authors with less knowledge of the selected story they want to write or just lazy to do research. I might use this format for my OS but for translated stories, everything has already been given. Just need to edit, review, fix, and expand if needed. Nonetheless, a calming roller coaster of a story such as this is always appreciated. ThxP.S. I have already read the original on MTL. And it is heartbreaking. But you sir/mam are doing a good job.
Honestly, this would have been a great HP fanfiction if the MC wasn't a lolicon who literally simps for a 10 years old and a classic (that isn't good and shouldn't exist) can beat elite aurors and profesors but is scared of women and actually act (not an act) his physical age which is 10. If we removed these overall i'd say 4.4-4.6 but If I gave a note above 4 stars as it is with these i'd feel ashamed of giving a note above 4 stars as it would put it in the same level as something that is actually deserving of such a note .
A good story, but somehow I am having a dejavu moments while reading this hahah
I would say that this is one best translation of I read in this app. Especially many of them is either mediocre or outright horrendous that they don’t put any effort to change any mistakes. At least this doesn’t the MC doesn’t feel like a typical Chinese type character. I might be wrong later on but so far I generally like it.
is this a re-write I swear I read this before, or is it translated