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This is a slightly alternate version of myself being reincarnated into a mix of Harry Potter and MCU with heightened intelligence and the powers of Aquaman.
If you do not like the story just don't read it. The hateful comments really kill my desire to write. If you think you could do a better job, write your own version I would be happy to read it.
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Story is too rushed ,Mc feels too robotic, Mc took Harry's destiny and stuff that's simply lazy writing . ..................................
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the story is very fast does not have much development and the MC honestly i don't know what the author wants to do the MC seems to be an idiot because who is dumb enough to wish an enemy who will want to kill you not to mention that after the parents die he says he wants revenge, to tell you the truth the MC just seems to be very dumb I was enjoying the story I just wasn't liking the MC and his wishes I wish the author good luck but I won't follow this story anymore (sorry for my english)
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Calidad de escritura: Primero que todo hay que aclarar que uso el traductor de google para leer este fanfic y asumo que su calidad de escritura es 10/10 porque es perfectamente entendible. Estabilidad de actualización: El autor sube al menos un capitulo cada día entonces de momento la estabilidad es 10/10 Desarrollo de la historia: De momento aun va arrancando pero entretiene Diseño de personajes: El autor logro hacer que me encariñara bastante con los personajes y se sienten vivos a su manera. Fondo mundial: Al ser hp y marvel tenemos un vasto mundo y el autor nos da a entender que va a ser capaz de aprovecharlo. Entonces hasta el momento la historia tiene un 5,0 pero conforme avancen los capítulos podremos ver si se mantiene.
Interesting take on harry potter. Can't wait to see the MC in hogwarts. Also, is his uncle Dwayne Johnson?? Or is that just an Easter egg. [img=recommend][img=update]
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Great story I absolutely love it has good powers that aren’t to op for mcu but give him a leg up in wizarding world the pacing is perfect and I love the family dynamic, also has a good balance of funny yet serious when it needs to be. bet that once it gets to 50 chapter if you keep writing it’ll be a top 3 Harry Potter fanfic on Webnovel it’s already in my top 5 even if it’s just getting started
I really enjoyed reading this story I'm a little sad to read most recent one that says he will not be updating anymore because the haters which really annoys me because I would rate this a 5 out of five if it had more updating stability
I really love this book .I can't wait to read more about this story and see where it will end up .i am so happy you upload more so i read more about this characters journey
I love the premise of the story man keep it up just hope that the character isn’t OP you know and plz dont make hime a murder bot cause i kniw most people are like kill him or hers but like let chill with that last PLZ dont drop👍🏾👍🏾✌🏾
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this is the best story I've read so far and it is breaking me up inside to see you dropping it😭😭🥲🥺
boa novel, se o desenvolvimento da história se manter será uma das melhores novelas....................................................................
I honestly didn't think I would get into this as much as I have. character development is far better than expected and so far I have no complaints about this story. truly hope this story doesn't get dropped. wonderful job. please keep it going.
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Cool story love the family not a boring start or growing stage I hope you can please continue or someone can adopt the story and create a gem.
i liked the idea very much since this is the first time I have seen this idea being propagated. hope you will not abandon the story. best of luck