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An almost ordinary guy died from overwork in his sleep. What will he find when he opens his eyes after a very long sleep?
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Misleading, should be uchiha heir not otsutuki. Also, Mc unworthy being an uchiha. Not that i say it's bad in fact this is very good novel but just misleading. I came for otsutuki not uchiha. Its like buying a burger but instead of real meat, they give you that fake-ass meat like veg. Sure both seems the same but taste different and you can't help but feel disappointed Maybe he'll trult be otsutuki heir (which i highly doubt) in the future or in the 25+ (where i dropped) Anyway, I'm just giving my honest review and perhaps will even read this when i crave for some uchiha
Love your fanfiction. I really love it. need frequent updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
earlier, others wrote that the MC is emotionally unstable. his plans change by 10 over the course of 28 chapters. at first, he is a good guy, but in the end he became an ordinary killer ( and according to the plan it will be even worse, but I can't be sure, the author constantly changes the mc's psychopassport). I'm not interested in this lottery, so I'll get off here. ciao.
Shamelessness is the second happiness ^^ I will continue writing this story and not going to drop it for sure. But since this is my first work, it is rather difficult to write it.
I read to chapter 13 and that is when the story lost me. I love naruto and I like fan-fictions that show me new facets of naruto or have some changes that prevent the/some tragedies in naruto. The main reason why i stopped reading at chapter 13, is the repeated starts and the MC's non-existence to the naruto timeline. And with each start, the average impression of the MC's character starts to degenerate more and more. The first start is that the MC has a happy family and he starts to train to be an awesome ninja. The MC and his family are self inserts into naruto and with this start, I was really interested, what changes are going to occur into naruto due to the MC and his family as self-inserts. The answer: Absolutely no change. His parents die with no influence/change to naruto.(This is the 1. scrapped start). Then the MC becomes part of Itachi and Sasuke's family and it looks like the first influence/change the MC is going to do is to prevent the Uchiha massacre. What changes happen to the naruto timeline: Absolutely nothing. Out of nowhere with no setup for no reason, the MC is bamboozled into losing some years. The Uchiha massacre happened and now the MC has to start anew(This is the 2. scrapped start). This is at chapter 13 and from what I saw, I am not interested in reading further.
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....................................................................................................................................need to work on your sentences, proofreading n not using english names in a naruto fanfic
i have not read it yet but i really wanted to see a lightning type shinobi cause i love lightning style [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Honestly i’m kinda lost as the mc’s goal is like a roller coaster. Read till chp 51 and he looks like he cares for his family again? Not sure but whatever itachi did to mc i did not like it as although i rather not have a mc that has no feelings for his family, i liked his plan on getting all tailed beasts to become stronger. But after mc recoved, chp 50, he lost interest in tailed beast and is now looking for something else. Idk what he’s doing but i would like mc to still get 10 tails to improve his strength. Other than that, story was great and can mc have relationship with kaguya?
well... the novel is good but i notice a lot of negative twists in the story that make me think the author doesn't like the mc, there are some errors about the age of the characters but i ignore that part, hope it's not harem.
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Great fan-fic I really enjoy reading it, and I love how you change the word story, great job and keep a good work!!! ✨ . .
One of the most fun I've read in a long time. The author's unpredictability and how he puts the story together will never bore the reader. Just read this.
Best naruto fanfic so far. even tho u refuse to save the uchiha clan I still like the development, and please don't drop it. Is the mc gonna be single all his life? And If u want to pair him w/ someone I hope u pair him with available female(someone that is still single in the canon) like mei or tsunade(poor girl).
I haven't read it yet, but i will give it five stars. BUT if it's not good, next time i will give only one star. .
so just to start this the english seems near perfect from the chaps I read which I know is important to alot of people additionally the story does a good job of subverting the MCs expectations regarding what will happen with his knowledge of the future this is used in one major event I wont spoil here there are some things i hope happens more like a pair of characters i wished were more developed as we dont get to see much of them or have them bond with the MC (hopefully author knows who I mean) otherwise though it's a good story so far and I reccomend it if you want a quick read
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epic and good story worth reading and long chapters! ⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠⚠
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
The novel is good for the most part I guess. The only problem I have is that the MC seems to be an emotionally unstable and impulsive person for someone who claims that he used to be in the military with pretty high merit? anyways the MC being hellbent on reviving his dead parents is so so so detrimental to the story cause we literally didn't have any interaction with them like seriously why the heck would I even care about them when we only their name and some other miscellaneous information.
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