R3vfor

R3vfor

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2020-05-31 加入 Ecuador
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徽章 6

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R3vfor
R3vfor
1 months ago
Posted

you are not him bro. don't try to write deep introspective character

R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

MC(After being betrayed by the people he saves in his 1st life, he vows to never make the same mistake again and 10chapters in what does he do??? well he goes and saves another "pitiful girl" he found in a church. Clearly not even remembering his vow), And the retarded author is so busy setting up for his "grand future wars" which is supposed to happen far off in the future and forgets that the MC is literally a 5year old outperforming beings over thousands of year old and they dont even question where the sudden powerup and change of the protagonist.

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R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

Annoying laugh "kekeke" and novel moves so fast it's disorientating .................................................................................................................................................

R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

Jogoat would be proud...................

R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

I don't need a fucking half a chapter describing how attractive someone is and another half a chapter of bystanders fawning over them and a bunch of male/female retards talking about how they're not gay.

R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

Fucking word vomit..... motherfucker had like 5 chapter of just talking with a dead man next moment he's labrat for another 6 chapter

R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

I had gotten somewhat interested reading the introduction chapter but was a bit skeptical because of the author's writing style and misinformation but i still wanted to give it a try. Only to find out that the author has a humor of a 13 year old kid.

R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Commented

what do you mean even stronger than ainz??? Ainz literally says himself that he's nowhere close to the top level players because he was just role playing and you're making it seem like ainz was top10

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R3vfor
R3vfor
1 years ago
Posted

Even though it very very very much confusing will all the he/she mistake. It's one of the better revenge story.