I really enjoyed reading it, good job don't give up ^_^
agree
"You heard that, that dude is a freaking time bomb." Scott said.
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
From what i know about SCP foundation, is that they will not be that friendly with scp or D class no matter what. But good fanfic anyway, i like it so far.
At this moment he knew...
"CHARRRRRRLLLLLESSSSSSSSSSS."
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
amazing
Finally i found something good to read Here are 5 stars and all my stones I have Please do not drop it, I am more than happy to read every new chapter every day!
Tehe, it's Konan + Kaguya + Hinata
Among the bodies was also the body of Payne.
Anime & Comics · Hellish_Rabbit
Oh no, that's me!
Reading thoughts isn't always good. Many people want to interrupt you with illogical phrases, but they keep silent until you finish talking, and then, they'll think they are lucky that they didn't open their mouths.
Anime & Comics · blazuki
I can hear Obito angry screams from here
該書已被刪除。
Author, delete similar 1-star comments. These are either ignorant people used to reading machine-translated stories where the protagonist is overpowered and omniscient, or people who don't want your work to reach the top. For those who haven't read it yet and are checking the comments to decide if it's worth reading: It definitely is. The world is well-built, and the relationships between the characters are well explained. The supernatural element in the form of chakra is described exceptionally well. All the techniques and the logic behind them that the protagonist learns always have a proper origin, rather than being granted by some "golden finger" pulled out of thin air like in some Chinese stories. The characters are well-developed, and the text is enjoyable to read. Regarding the excessive cruelty, I can only say that it's quite realistic. In a world of endless war, betrayal, and violence, it's hard to imagine kind-hearted people willing to help you. Everyone pursues their own goals or desires. Hiruzen is no exception here; he's portrayed very realistically. There’s none of that typical dynamic between Hiruzen and Danzo found in 99% of fanfics: "I’m the Hokage!" "You’ll regret this!" Sometimes characters are depicted a bit naively, such as Mito when she trusted Hiruzen, but overall, I’m satisfied and eagerly awaiting new chapters.
Naruto: Betrayed From The Start
Anime & Comics · ShixT9