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the story has 300 chapters please read it at my pat reon page
https://www.pat reon.com/Fatenovels
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I did not own some of the world settings, but the remaining is all my own creation.
In any world there is no villain or protagonist instead there are people with various levels of luck and opportunities.
The final winner among them becomes a hero or the protagonist while the remaining people that became the stepping stones for the protagonist become the villains.
The villains are actually formed because of the mistakes of the so called good and peace loving people.
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A good man that was darkened by the seemingly good people became a villain.
Finally after achieving his goals of revenge on the society he died happily while the people that killed him only has despair because of the after math.
When he opened his eyes he was already 2 years old kid that got his head bumped.
Most probably he died at that time and the soul of this villain replaced the kid.
The most shocking thing is that there is a strange creature taking care of him.
He has seen this creature in a movie in his previous life.
Can’t villain see a movie with his mistress?
This should be Kreacher.
Immediately the memories of the kid returned to his mind.
Immediately he understood he is the son of Sirius black and Mary Goldsman.
He is called Jonathan black.
He is currently in the black house under the care of his grandmother Walburga Black a pure blood enthusiast.
“Ding, congratulations host you have obtained the villain choice system.”
“Please make your first choice.
Option 1: Push the blame of your injury to Draco Malfoy; you will be rewarded with 1000 gold Galleons.
Option 2: push the blame to Crabbe and Goyle; you will receive +2 percent critical hit in everything you wanted.”
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It's good demaize. Sensational, Very good, Incredible, Monumental, Blessed, Excellently good, Genius, Absolutely good, Great, Quality: 10/10, Chris Bumbstead approves, It's divinely good
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It is a pretty decent novel, MC is okayish, Grammer is below average with some mistakes(use grammerly).I liked how you dealt with the cur. Keep it up. It is definitely a good read. Funny thing is I can pay you 4 times the price for parteon unfortunately my parents will not allow online transactions .
Tirando o fato que a história é mais uma narração, e não exatamente demonstra um desenvolvimento dos personagens e do mundo, pra mim é uma história excelente .— (Portuguese - Brazilian. My native language). With the exception of the fact that this story has a text focused on narration, and not exactly character development and story background, it is an excellent story, I really liked it. — (Text Translated by Google Translate).
................................................................... Thanks for the novel , I Like it. Really enjoying this work, can’t wait for more!!! ...................................................................
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The writing style is all narration and the development of the story is generic and its a cool concept but ruined by wish-fullfilment? You’ll get it if you read
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The development is generic, but it's possible to handle it, the biggest problem is that out of 19 chapters read, 99% of the content is narration, it's not for me.