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There are way too many spelling and grammatical errors. Proofread before you post. Proofread before you post. Proofread before you post. Proofread before you post. Proofread before you post.
Its fun and light hearted themed work and if you are not ANALYSING MISTAKES/NITPICKING and just want to read this great work i TOTALLY RECOMMEND it. AUTHOR please please don't drop this book. (i am gonna bring out the gun[img=update])
Author, you can change the cover image in Webnovel Inkstone, it will give a nicer touch to my library. xd X Z D Dd D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D
If you want too read about how An Mc that has powerful system but don't use it to its full potential and go after any girl he see ( but he doesn't chase them he just buy skills from system that make every 10 years old girl fall for him ), at the start it was good but after all he is think is how to get 10 years old using system skills. Like he was a grown man and he is doing this and when it comes to playing with his brother he thinks it's childish behavior ( although he still play with him). This story would have been better with an Op Mc and The different Harry Potter world. But author made this story about a pedophile
IF FORGETTING ABOUT ALL THE GRAMMER MISTAKES THEN ITS A GOOD FANFIC I'M ENJOYING IT 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️NICE NICE!
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it's a good AU Harrypotter one of the best in AU type where potters are alive.keep updating its getting interesting and better with new chapters .
No just no this is not good dawg don’t read it’s stupid