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Worst Fanfic ever, it's really boring. Just drop it. 🙏👌✌️🖖😆😆😆😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😛😝😝
The story is interesting, but the MC is really weak will against woman, it's bearable at first but when that midget system assistant appear, everything went down, that thing can read MC mind and do so all the time and keep blabbering about what in his mind to other people. The system is also annoying, when he send a friend invitation to a girl the line become like " you have a thick thigh, wanna be friend?" or something like that and he got slap without having any clue about it...........If it's a MC that tell other about his secret( his cheat and such) it's annoying enough, here we have the system assistant doing it for him without his consent.............I don't know what to say, if it's suppose to be funny then it's not, it's really infuriating. The premise of the story can be interesting be people with high blood pressure probably shouldn't read this.
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(it's actually supposed to be 2,5~3 stars, but someone gotta balance things out when 20 reviews out of 50 were 5-star spammed by the exact same dude) So here's the rub - the beginning actually isn't that bad; but the further you delve, the worse it becomes. As if it wasn't enough to have a stereotypical dense japanese harem/isekai protag who gets pushed around by everyone in a kilometer radius, we also get Paimon playing as the system fairy. And if you think she was annoying in sourse material, just wait until you see her here - an annoying little shit (with IQ lower than Aqua's) that can read your mind, hates your guts, constantly blathers out all your thoughts and secrets to everyone around trying to ruin your relationships and reputation, steals from you, does nothing of use and serves no purpose apart from mooching off you while being overall an ungrateful piece of garbage. Never thought this day would come, but Umaru-bitсh finally has a competitor for the Worst Pile Of Filth Alive title. And if you thought that was bad, just wait until the actual world-hopping part starts after the first couple dozen chapters... Not gonna lie, it hurts. This is one of the rare occasions where you can see that author actually gave a shit and put in honest-to-god effort, but this just isn't good at all.
1st he is like everyone slave who take all work to himself 2nd his system is annoying because the painting who can know anything about me be memory or thought and she can tell anyone about it hell even she always tells what ever he thought and the system itself not make it easier the purpose is like dimensional chat group but every invitation is about make me in bad like "he you have great legs will you become my friend?" something along the line 3rd his behavior around woman is like typical Japanese beta mc being pushed around like he didn't have any back bone and and can't say no to them
Actually it's quite enjoyable at the first dozen chapters but quickly became boring after world-hopping and forced romance. I personally don't like how Paimon just tells MC's secret to his harem and how Goddess behave like a prostitute to MC. Exclude forced romance, bad character development, unfunny emergency food(It would be better if her jokes improve), annoying and horny goddess. Everything is okay. Actually, I should rate this novel about 2 or 3 but FOX_ZRS spammed too many emoji 5-star reviews so I'll balance it with 1-star review.
(I used Google Translate) It is disappointing how the expectations that are created are not matched. First, even though I understand respect for the family, he carries her on his back and does everything, and when he leaves, it seems that everything depends on him. The impression is that he doesn't have fun or is a child, when his "out of this world" goal was to relax. Then Megumin is about to learn Explosion, but the MC says nothing and lets her waste potential, following Cannon. Afterwards, he is transported to Owari's world, but he doesn't know and takes time to find out, as if the system didn't exist. Then he goes to Fairy Tail to save Erza from the Tower of Heaven, where it seems that he will solve everything easily, but he rolls up and becomes nothing but useless, only to end up with her, leaving the others to be slaves, because " Ultar has owned Jellal and will blow up all runaway children on the ship ". Wasn't he powerful? . I stopped reading because I feel that I am only disappointed. For those who like Cannon to be followed, but with one more character and making jokes with references, it's for you. Another positive point is the existence of other POV's, in addition to the characters being similar, as to personality, with the originals. I don't know if the MC will mature later on, but for me I stopped. Ah, besides that the fairy that he receives and accompanies him is useless, that does not fulfill his duty, just to be reading his thoughts and subconscious, besides eating food.
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hmmm.. this book is fun to read before the world travel happen.. but after that happen its goes down the hill.. not fun to read anymore.. the joke becoming more and more annoying.. then fairytail arc did it.. it kill my mood to read.. totally bullshit arc.. my suggestion is to make it like chat group fanfic for world travel.. you can make konosuba your homeworld.. then the rest is like how other chat group fanfic.. and tone down your joke.. just dont chuck in jojo refrence everytime.. its annoying.. because its not funny if the timing not right..
It was already light in plot, char development and world background in the earlier chapters. The comedy was barely ok. After deciding to visit Wiz shop, it started to go downhill. Another story among many where the high rating is a lie because of mindless spammers and bots.
this is a click bait with a beta MC with to much errors and one of then is the author , i would say sorry but after i have seen the spaming of five stars the author posted i wanna to toss him on a trash bin
simp mc, nerf mc, annoying system, force romance, the mc does everything anyone says, typical Japanese protagonist(infinite stratos ichika annoying), no story pretty much the original plot with the MC added and thats it! the author keeps reviewing his novel with 5 stars to keep it afloat.
No plot, terrible grammar Only canon stuff happening with some fillers involving the MC
don't mind me i'm just here to rate it 1 star because i don't like it this is for quality control purpose only. don't mind me i'm just here to rate it 1 star because i don't like it this is for quality control purpose only. don't mind me i'm just here to rate it 1 star because i don't like it this is for quality control purpose only.
my man, this story is like a clickbait, you think thats is good because the 4.6 stars but if you see the reviews the big part is only 5 stars spam
Mc is a simp, a beta male.. he wants to revolt and Get out of the place by force but jellal Dismiss his plan and erza doEs not believe in hIm even though erza saw jow powerful he was but sTill because erza do not want it then he follows.. very submissiVe.
Don't drop it i like the idea of it and it very interesting. ....................😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
try to read it again and its just as bad! dont let the rating fool you is really really bad. all cliches are implemented in the worse possible way and the author reviews his own novel just so if stay in 4. ☝️.
Whiting is bad. annoying system. anoying girls. Bata male Mc. bad grammar. simp Mc. kaioken simp Mc. super Saiyan simp Mc E=MC simp² = I'm dropping this sh!Ty ff rn
(2.5 to 3 stars but the star rating above is to balance this overrated novel) Man can you somehow remove paimon from his soul, separate her from him or even make the mc kill her . Here presence is disgusting as not only does read the mind of the mc and forces the plot/harem to the degree of nausea but she is practically manipulating his life, actions and love life to the point that I believe that she is the main Villain or a redundant painful exsistance . I don't know how can you make the mc tolerate her and why whyyýyyyyyyy did you give here so much authority,control and freedom. Seriously I wanted to give up on this novel but its potential is amazing but you keep wasting it mainly because 3 things paimon(mainly), how the supposed reincarnation of the sun & reincarnation of Adam is so mentally challenged &immature (I don't mind being weak to stron strength) and finally the mc age yah not the harem age but the mc can't you please understand that 14 years old for him isn't a good age for harem,continous s*x ,preg****y & having children. I believe that even his children is older than him in the future is this not bothering any one when picturing Adam the father of all humanity and the sun the oldest object in the solar system somehow a 14 year old brat isn't what comes to mind right?. I wish I could continue reading this book but I can't take it anymore 🥲🥲 it gotten to the degree that reading this not only kills my mode for the day but also give serious headaches, seriously boils my blood in anger and make me disappointed & depressed. I am dropping it until you the author or anyone either tell me how the author is going to handle this problems or until the novel end or goes 100 or so chapters so I can see if this problems are solved or even addressed by the characters themselves somehow (agree to prevent paimon from reading his mind , give the ownerof the system some authority over it not make him a puppet, make him do an introspection on his actionsor even make the mcs women address there problems and how much forcing and pressuring does they do on the mc and address him with this problem).
If only the mc wasn't a simp, a beta male that is submissive to women, he kills without hesitation every male that wants to kill him, but when it's a woman, he immediatly starts to act like a brainless japanese harem mc that simps on every woman he sees. Also, it was mentioned that he had a perfect compatibility with sunshine but somehow he can't use it during the night like mael, the one who was the perfect vessel for it. that means he got nerfed. There are just too much clichés that I'm skipping paragraphs at this point. The only thing that kept me reading till now is the thanos and jojo references , but even that is getting old so I suppose I'm dropping this in a few chapters.