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Golden Hearkening

Fantastique 14 章節 12.5K 流覽
作者: Aespekson

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Purpose: The focus of this book is the development of August, the protagonist(s), and the development of his philosophies. Power is important, but being powerful isn't the primary focus of this book.
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Synopsis:
August was born on Earth, a genius born into a wealthy family who wanted for nothing. Depression was a constant, however, which eventually led to his suicide. Feeling that nobody cared, he relinquished his luxury in a spoiled fit. During his travel into this world, August had split into two copies. Damon, named after what August had mistakenly called him at first, a demon, had been trapped in a great sword, while August inhabited a corpse. August only harbored the ordinary trivial sadness, confusion, and discomfort, but Damon was losing his mind. Minds are meant to have an affiliated physiology; without one, it destroys itself. Damon had to find a magical solution and find a new vessel before he became a slave to his insanity. He had made a bet: he would find a vessel before time left his side. If he won, he would win his life and his mind back; if he lost, August would kill him, as Damon made him swear to.
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Excerpts:
Damon broke August's stupor, saying, "As soon as I arrived and figured some things out, I noticed that something was off. It took me a long while to find out what it was, but I think I now know what it is."

"I can't feel anything anymore. I don't have anything in the way of emotions. I'm aware of the concept and I'm aware of the fact that I should feel them, but I don't. And now, I don't know what to do. I don't care anymore. Do whatever you want."

"Take me. Do something to me. Please. Or kill me at least. Destroy me, if you'll do nothing else."
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A black great sword with ruby inlays sprouted from the chest of a burning Elvish corpse. The flames licked the blood, puss, and flesh on its blade before eventually devouring them, too, and being reflected in its ruby inlays that ran from its hilt to where the sword disappeared, the elf's chest.

Smoke engulfed the sword, giving Damon's namesake more meaning, mimicking a common sight in hell. August dragged the meat over and cooked the fetid harvest in the heat of a smoldering corpse.
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Misery has always loved company, so he held no compassion for them. He cared that he had crossed the boogeyman line of murder, but he was still the subject of his thoughts. In his degenerate and corrupt character, an unholy and evil union thrived; his hedonism and nihilism had been wed and birthed this vile narcissism.
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I plan to release a chapter every day, barring the odd happening that prevents me from writing. Each chapter ought to be from 1.2k-2.2k words at an average of approx. 1.4k. It could be more than that or it could be slightly less than that, but I do plan to release every day at 19:00 UTC+8.

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I'm reviewing this book a little early in its development, but i think that i ought to give my thoughts. So far, the writing seems to be very high quality. It seems like the author actually cares about the details and puts enough effort into it to upload it with very few errors. I'd especially like to applaud that it doesn't rely on a system. The plot is intriguing and unique and the character design is superb, but the author does tend to overthink and over engineer things. The magic system is a major example of this. It's complicated and sightly convoluted, but it does seem to make sense if you think about it. The basics of the magic system are solid, but it is pretty complicated. The author tends to release a chapter per day most days, but we'll occasionally go a day without. The world's background hasn't been fully fleshed out yet, so I can't really review that, but I'm looking forward to it :).

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