摘要
Humm, i find myself in a predictment, i dont know where i am, and thats....curious, but in another unrelated note....IS THAT A 14 FEET TALL GORILA?!
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Hey guys, hope you all doing well, this is gonna be my first novel, so be free to give me your suggestions and add this to your library, but no bad hate, or i will be sad ;). Anyway, hope you enjoy it Bye!
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
an interesting novel, different from the usual got fic, the power of the mc although it is useful does not turn the animals that help him into slaves, it would be interesting if he met some tribes of normal humans or some civilization, the writing is easy to follow although the occasional information is a bit annoying but the rest has enough potential.
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writing quality 5 updates 4 (cant say if the updates will slow down) development 4 (there are only 4 chapter and although they are amazing I cant say that it will stay the same in the future) character design 4 (haven't really been able to see that much character yet but so far it seems good) World background 4 (it is got but there are some difference's and I do not know yet if the difference's are good or bad.)
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the story for me is not bad,not good either! It is ok i guess but really boring. the idea is good but something about reading it really make me skip half the chapters. the Mc felt like a young master to much of my likes.
...Did you drop the story?...I Hope not, it's really good...Really I love this kind of story so please keep going on...maybe another 200 chapters?...100?...pleeeeaseeee
This is very good. The author seems to know a lot about the GoT lore, and isn't afraid of making the MC too powerful, which given that there are immortal superhuman necromancers and flying tanks otherwise known as dragons, shouldn't be an issue even if the MC is way more powerful than the original GoT characters.