摘要
‘Is this… an interface?’
Despite having no knowledge of where he was, he was familiar with the system interface.
After all, it was oddly similar to the novel he closely followed.
But…
‘This doesn’t make any sense, I should have died already.’
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After a tragic accident, he found himself transmigrated inside one of his favorite novels.
He realized he was now Brandon Locke, an unfamiliar character, an extra.
Armed with knowledge about the future, Brandon now has to traverse this new world all on his own.
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Hola!. I'm here to give a review on one of my favorite novels I read right now on this platform. This is a complete honest review from me as a reader who is caught up with non privilege, and my position as a moderator of this novel has nothing to do with it. Let's start with the obvious. Of course arriving on this novel you might think it's a good old cliche exta novel, but I beg to differ that ITS NOT. In no way does the protagonist hide his power or try to keep the maincast away. He is not weak either as he is quick to catch up to the main cast. Story wise, this is a complete different route from the extra genre though I do agree that some starting chapters are similar, but lets be honest. Don't we all expect the starting to be similar in an extra novel. The character development of characters is very good, and though you might hate the author in some mini arcs for example the cultural festival, please stop being an average wn reader and read further to see why he did that. The characters are neither too flushed out or just blatantly dry. If they are, then that's just something that author develops further. The pacing of the novel is perfect as well, its neither too slow nor too fast. Which is also one of the main reasons why I love this novel. The plot of the novel is really different from extra novels and I mean it. In the normal cliche novels where the extra just has to kill demons, this is quite different as there are further things that come on later into the story. The author also perfectly sets emotions, depth and character development at each plot point. The stability of updates is something you absolutely don't need to worry about as author updates 2 chaps daily while also doing mass releases time to time. Overall, I highly recommend this novel to everyone and I would really hope that they give this a try and find out for yourself that this is infact not glazing and an actual honest review of the novel.
From what I've seen so far, this novel does have a lot of potential. Villain novels are quite garbage whereas extra novels are now being overtaken and corrupted by those Chinese authors. Luckily this one doesn't follow your Chinese troupe. The mc actually befriends the main character for once unlike all those other trash where you see him stealing all the main characters "chances" or fate. Now to talk about the novel, our mc is an average lad from Earth who got thrown into this Magical Earth. Unlike novels like The Novel's Extra and Author's POV, where the mc's are mocked for using strange weapons or doing weird actions, the mc in here is originally seen as a talented fellow. Even later on people don't usually look down on him or try to get into fights with him. On the other hand, the original mc of the novel is the person who is looked down even though he's Rank 1 which makes it interesting. The dynamics of this novel between the characters are good enough and.. I better see more chapters real soon or else, Author just know that you're going in my basement. This isn't a threat, I'm merely stating the future.
Since I'm helping the author edit, I have to leave a 5 star review. Author is a beast at writing, in just a day he'd finish 8 chapters already. Mass release your 50 stockpile when?
(TL;DR at the end)At first, I simply started this novel for more extra brainrot. I came in expecting the same old generic bs we see in literally every other extra novel in existence. I did not get what I wanted. But was I disappointed? NO. 'Extra's Descent', is unlike any other extra novel I have ever read(and I have read a LOT). First of all, the writing quality. The writing style of this novel is simple. It is more or less the same as what you can see in korean webnovels, or even in Entrail_JI's 'Advent of the three calamities'. Simple, yet efficient. It is a writing style I personally like a lot.[5/5] Next up, is the update stability. I have been reading this novel since it didn't even have a measly 10 chaps and I can guarantee you that not a day has passed without 2 chapters being dropped. And of course, the bonus chapters for meeting PS goals is being updated as well.[5/5] Story Development. I have to say this is most probably the most surprising part of this novel for me. Like I said, I went expecting a generic story and at first, I believed that is what I got. Oh boy was I wrong. What I thought to be plot holes at first turned out to be plot points for a major reveal. What I thought to be a generic story at first, turned out to be a gem hidden in plain sight. If you are going to read this novel, give it at least 50 chapters before you drop. Trust me when I say it will be worth it.[5/5] Character Design. We are getting to the good points(oh well, everything before was also good points but this does require a special mention). The character design of this novel is one of its strongest points. Each character, offers to substance to the novel and are a major driving force for the plot. In fact, I would dare say this is a character-driven story despite its enthralling plot.[6/5] World Building. Now this is where the novel hits a bump in the road. Everything, novel or otherwise, has its flaws. While I wouldn't go so far as to call it a flaw, the world building of this novel is in fact one of the only things I find to be lacking. Of course, it offers a unique twist by getting rid of demons. That's right, this is an extra novel WITHOUT DEMONS OR OTHER GENERIC RACES LIKE ELVES AND DWARVES AND ORCS. But I still find it to be lacking because we know nearly nothing about the world. All the information we need is revealed as the plot progresses but we don't get much additional information.[4.5/5] TL;DR: Read at least 50 chaps before deciding to drop, great story, spectacular characters, KR style writing, 2 chaps per day, NO WAR AMONGST GENERIC RACES BS and 100% recommended read. WQ:5/5, SU:5/5, SD:5/5, CD:6/5, WB:4.5/5. What are you still waiting for? Go read.
it's just average in my opinion cause there's nothing new here . The novel is about a teenage boy who used to read a novel but dropped it and died when he wanted to pick it up again and got transmigrated into an Extra's body ( Brandon )in the novel who might not actually be an Extra because he thinks the system he has was for the other Brandon The Extra's are pretty fleshed out which is really good . The system is a meh at best it has the ability to create any skill . The MC Brandon well he's not too smart I can't really blame him cause he was still a teenager when he got transmigrated but still a little bit of common sense is still needed which he doesn't seem to have The plot is not really good here's why -The MC wanted to steal a mask from the academy which is supposed to be the most prestigious and safest academy in the world but somehow his subordinate whom he asked to sneak into the academy when there was a party for the arrival of the new students and act as a waiter oh and you would think there would be security to stop him but no he somehow managed to sneak into the party in the academy with no prep time at all like the MC told him at the last minute . So he somehow managed to sneak into the academy blah blah blah started scouting the place where the mask is supposed to be looking for the security camera location and all that. Then the MC and him started sneaking into the place where the oh so great mask is supposed to be and again you would think for a valuable mask in a prestigious academy they would put more security but nope only two guards at the entrance of the place where the mask is supposed to be and MC great subordinate managed to distract them buy saying he wanted to use the toilet or whatever and the stupid guards followed him to take him to the toilet both of them for Christ sake so the MC was able to enter the place with ease . Honestly I get the author new that's why I'm stopping here and not saying more oh and the author is thinking of making a poll to make the his BLOOD RELATED SISTER his Love interest which in my opinion shouldn't even be considered at all . still gonna read it but once the poll is up and i see his sister name I'm out (Excuse my English )
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I'm writing this review after reading 36 chapters and so far it looks really promising, but to go in depth a bit more:- 1.The writing quality is very good and I didn't notice any grammatical errors while reading, which is always a plus. 2.the upload schedule so far seems good and author is active on discord so you can go barrage him on there, if he ever stops uploaded. 3.As for the novel itself, I can't say much as it's just starting, but I really like the MC and his skill weaver ability, also his personality is pretty likeable, even the side cast seem developed and likeable, which I really enjoy. 5.Overall I would recommend this novel to anyone who's a fan of the the genre.
I love the way there are a lot of jjk references, but i would like to feel Brandon's personality not another character's personality. i feel like the romance in this novel is not smooth, as all of a sudden he would love Amelia or Rachel, i hope some explanation would show up in the next chapters. but overall i love the novel very much and it has so much potential, so good luck to the author.
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Review at chapter 63: The story is actually good and doesn't follow most cliché tropes. The main character isn't a beta who hides in the shadows all the time or decides to follow the plot or stay away from the protagonist of the book he was sent into. The story is still in its early stages, so there might be some things that are yet to be properly developed. The interactions with the characters though are really fun to read, as each one doesn't seem bland and has a personality that you would enjoy.
Just binged it. Some small inconsistencies, but overall, a very good read. Takes a somewhat cliche situation and changes it enough so it feels fresh. The MC is a bit bland, but to compensate, the other characters are more developed than they normally would be in an average Webnovel story. Would recommend it, not a waste of time. Writing Quality: ★★★★ -No obvious mistakes and an easy read. Story Development: ★★★ -Cliche but not borning. Character design: ★★★★ -Good overall, but should fletch out the MC some more. Update Stability: ★★★★★ World Background: ★★★★ -Actually interesting and more thought-out than normal novels.
yo, I don't write review so often but I need to write a review about this to tell you how fking awesome this novel is. so this novel is written by a bastard name Athex and I hate to admit but the way he writes is just peak. you can't even say that this is his first novel! and about the plot, I thought that it was another extra novel that has all similar plot but I couldn't have been more wrong in my life 😭😭 it might be similar to other extra novels for a few chapters but it is so different in a fking awesome way like main character doesn't hide his strength early romance but not that early like it is early in comparison to other novel of the same genre and we are talking about romance then all female characters are so peak but for me, fml will always be Belle. and there are so many female characters but that doesn't me that this is a harem because I and all my homeis hate harem and the conclusion of my all yapping is READ IT
If I’m being honest the biggest issue with this series is the fact that he’s joining the primordials for no apparent reason simply because some random guy told him to there is no benefit to doing this it’s not even like they have the same goals so I wonder why this is happening I really wanted to drop the series honestly because there’s no point to this it just happened in the span of half a chapter it doesn’t move the story forward you can argue it holds it back because instead of getting stronger and finding people to help combat the future threat he’s mingling with lowlifes and thugs who won’t hesitate to run for their lives I really hoped it was just like a threat but the author made it official later on
Ngl at first thought this was a TAPOV copy but it's unique in its own way. The comedy is also hilarious.
i really love it the novel,but the moment where to the part where Brandon realized his feelings for Rachel,i started to feel bored.no offense but,The novel was really amazing, it's just that i just don't like romance.
I feel the storyline and the way thinks progress is really good and organic.It is the beginning of the novel but i can confidently say the best are the characters, the author knows how to write them and the side charachters don't feel one dimensional.All in all, im excited to keep reading more and see how the novel continues.
I’m at about chapter 130/260 right now and I decided to write a little review. O could type an actual review but I don’t feel like it. So to sum it up, I feel this story is more romance focused than action and I’m real sad about that. I don’t hate romance, in fact I think a little romance is always a nice addition but damn, I was expecting a lot more action from this novel and so far it’s been kind of disappointing. I get that stories need time to build themselves up and get started on the plot but, there has really only been one little arc in the forest and that’s about it. It seems this story is a lot more slice of life oriented as well which I don’t mind much but it gets a little boring after a while. Anyways maybe this whole romance thing gets notched down a level or two in the other 130 chapters I still have to read currently so we’ll see.
The author did something good with the concept of being an extra and said screw being an extra. The characters are the driving point of this novel, unique and loveable, their interactions always make my day better. MC is a loveable idiot. IDK what else to say, I started it like meh and I couldn't put it down after it got rolling. Easy 5-star.
I was so excited when I read first 10 chapter I wanted to review at that time but i control myself so that i can read more chapters and review properly so here's my review-- i am loving the current development of story the character there personality and also Gojo reference after so much time i found a good novel with good story I was so bored of reading other novels that I was thinking now good novels with nice story doesn't exist now every where is bad novel with same story of op mc,it's harem and bad development.but this novel is best it should be in at least top 5 of ranking this is a quiet different from other extra mc, transmigrated reader novels.i wish it had more chapters i am so excited to read new chapters,the mc is not like other who distant itself from protagonist and the skill of mc his nah i would win mentality everything I love about him the story is also progressing nicely , i am thinking of what can be improved in this novel but for now I can't seem to get what you improve because from my perspective it's a perfect I was thinking of what should be bad or should improved about this novel but I am not getting any thoughts for now and trust me i thought for so much time but i didn't get anything that was wrong or needed improvement for now this is my review I know there not much that the author can get from my review but is i reviewed . and any one reading this review to get idea if they should read it or not i am just saying read it give it a try its something new we don't get to see a lot in novel. GIVE MORE JUJUTSU KAISEN REFERENCE OR ANY OTHE ANIME. AUTHOR I CURSE YOU TO COMPLETE THIS NOVEL.
This will reach the peak. 🥰 I saw this randomly in my feed and saw the author so I thought I would write this to encourage them. Writing looks great so good luck!