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Entrail_JI

This will reach the peak. 🥰 I saw this randomly in my feed and saw the author so I thought I would write this to encourage them. Writing looks great so good luck!

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Tsukasa0

Hola!. I'm here to give a review on one of my favorite novels I read right now on this platform. This is a complete honest review from me as a reader who is caught up with non privilege, and my position as a moderator of this novel has nothing to do with it. Let's start with the obvious. Of course arriving on this novel you might think it's a good old cliche exta novel, but I beg to differ that ITS NOT. In no way does the protagonist hide his power or try to keep the maincast away. He is not weak either as he is quick to catch up to the main cast. Story wise, this is a complete different route from the extra genre though I do agree that some starting chapters are similar, but lets be honest. Don't we all expect the starting to be similar in an extra novel. The character development of characters is very good, and though you might hate the author in some mini arcs for example the cultural festival, please stop being an average wn reader and read further to see why he did that. The characters are neither too flushed out or just blatantly dry. If they are, then that's just something that author develops further. The pacing of the novel is perfect as well, its neither too slow nor too fast. Which is also one of the main reasons why I love this novel. The plot of the novel is really different from extra novels and I mean it. In the normal cliche novels where the extra just has to kill demons, this is quite different as there are further things that come on later into the story. The author also perfectly sets emotions, depth and character development at each plot point. The stability of updates is something you absolutely don't need to worry about as author updates 2 chaps daily while also doing mass releases time to time. Overall, I highly recommend this novel to everyone and I would really hope that they give this a try and find out for yourself that this is infact not glazing and an actual honest review of the novel.

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kadiyan_himesh

Did author drop the novel or its just on hiatus.........?

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Roronoa_Zoro_5937

u goddamn idiot author why did u break up amelia and Brandon it wasn't enough for rachel but now amelia?😭😭🤬🤬😡👿 just pls make sure that she makes up with him again i can't bear to see a perfect story's mc's gf to end with someone else I beg you, if you are continuing this story just make sure that amelia has to end up with Brandon only.. I don't care how many days it takes when you write again, pls just don't destroy the best couple of the story by stopping your work my mentality is being destroyed just by thinking about it

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Ancient_Lost

Damn, where do I start? Ah yes the protagonist, this is the third time I've tried to read this, initially I dropped it at chapter 130, and the second time I gave up even before that milestone, reading again I reached the middle of chapter 200, the protagonist simply goes from one extreme to the other and decides to call others failures hahahahaah is it serious? Original Brandon or failed Jin? hahahahah I'm going to chapter 400 and if that doesn't improve I'm just going to give up on this

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Bastard_00_00

Is this book dropped author?....plz reply

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Obeylisk

This is just too bland and nonsensical. Why are you guys misleading? I wasted my time thanks for the reviews, read it untill 90 or something. It doesn’t get any better.

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Megatrix123

Ok, so I started reading this book in the first few days when I found a webnovel and it was easily one of the best novels I have read to date. I already caught up to the latest chapters and I have to say it's amazing the plot, the characters, and their interactions are just so well-crafted and it very amazing but I have to say that the first few chapters did have a few dumb scenes and I understand that you were going for a more funny approach at that time but still it is peak. Now for the best part of the character development, it's easily the best how the character goes from a basic character to a fascinating character with many layers and that's my review. And for the amazing novel here is a 5-star

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roshan3756

When can we expect a new chapter, considering it's been a month and the author is working on a new novel? The author's other work is great, but we can't wait for a new chapter for this novel.

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MugoxNR

It follows the same path as other stories in the EXTRA genre, but the protagonist's personality leaves something to be desired, even the part I read (chapter 50) and the construction of both the world and the other characters seems dull. There are interesting things but I wasn't interested enough to continue reading (via Google Translate)

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Ashborn_3522

ummmm, so. ..... will it continue or will it drop ????

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Fellow_Daoist_1902

It is an intriguing read, quite different from other novels with this setting. The planning and foresight also make it significantly better, making it feel much more like a polished novel than most entries on this platform, especially in this genre. The character designs are great; I personally loved how they've been written. To make everyone feel like their own entity, despite some barely participating in proceedings, is not an easy task by any measure. The mental health of most characters in situations similar to these is often ignored, but the author does well to not only include it but also make it look natural. There are quite a few grammatical errors and some repeated errors. It's still better than average webnovel quality, but this work is good enough for me to evaluate as a proper novel, rather than a webnovel entry, so I'm holding it to higher standards. However, I was disappointed by some of the writing. While this work loosely follows the vein of a tragedy, with the protagonist suffering throughout, the plot choices sometimes make it feel forced. Midway through a particular arc, the story becomes needlessly convoluted, with the revelations surrounding Jin and Brandon Locke not landing an impact. Even 400-odd chapters later, there are more questions than answers, and nothing is known about the main disaster that Brandon seems to be preparing so fervently to face. The author keeps introducing new variables in the story, while unexplored plotlines still remain, perhaps in a worse state than when they were introduced.  With all that said, it's definitely worth exploring, if only for the interesting world built by the author.

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Heat_Cando

I was a bit disappointed at the start, per-say but hmm... The start in the end was just a build-up for the whole plot. Yea I can definitely agree with the mods that this book is nice. Everything is fleshed out, author isn't afraid to do something(heh death), every character has a purpose and non forgotten. Very well written author. What else can I say?hmmm I reccomend this book, but it definitely isn't an "extra" genre novel lol.

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Tls12
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Me who still thought Rachel is the FML......[img=Your move]

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Slj91
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Well, the novel had a good promise at the beginning, but as the story moved foraward, the character development, plot and world building became an utter mess. Honestly, there’s so many plot wholes and attempts to patch it up that have gone wrong that by the time you’re reading around the 250th chapter, it seems you’ve read four different novels that have been mixed up and created a chimera novel. That’s a big downside with daily novels, due to the daily uploads, the authors disregard any framework for the story to be of a good quality.

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Shinigami_Thefool

i read till chapter 171 it was all good but the moment i saw the wiki and sa that his love interest will change from rachelle to amellia, i decided to drop it, i do love romance to be included in action fantasy novels but what i hate the most is harem and ntr genre , but even while im dropping it but for people who have no problem with harem an ntr them its a good story as far as chapter 171

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Vortex_876

Story is Great. But sometimes some parts are annoying, like the thing with Brandon and Rachel. Great story but Author forgot to add Dense MC tag. I am on chapter 133. Let me know who is the FL and if Brandon gonna stay Dense?

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Salem_Zaed

It’s good, I just dislike onething that is the Mc always somehow will be beaten up by someone stronger, it feel like the author hate Mc and just keep beating him up, and why didn’t the mc already create a regeneration skill, how many time was he beaten up and yet he never created one it seem stupid to me.

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Humanchaos

I've finished until chapter 114 and I absolutely adore how you write!! ( ˶ˆᗜˆ˵ ) I came across in this novel out of curiosity because your cover is sooooo catchy! And I didn't regret reading it. Will continue to farm on your chapters! I'm not sure how to rate this without spoiling anything so I will be just vaugue in my review

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Christian_Lynch

this is PEAK i love the story so far on chapter 290 the mc has went through alot of development the side characters like raven aint get much but they are developing slowly i love the 10000 regression plotline alot and how coleblooded and insane he has become after it all and i LOVE amelia 2nd fav character after brandon

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Daoist_God_

SIMPLY THE PEAK WN OF ALL TIME.... CHECK IT OUT RN

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Bestkid_12

We've been waiting for an update???? 😞 besides that this was an amazing book it has been a while since I found a book with this much depth to the characters and the plot

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radioactive_jig0l0

i read this story with great anticipation till chapter 16 but regret fullt, this is utter trash, many events does not even make sense , i don't even know why this has reached 2.2 million views, maybe people like this trash? . i don't know but if you are wondering whether you should read it or not. just don't.

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Najeebullah_Khan

This was good until about chapter 137 when the author got Rachel involved in the whole syndicate plot. After that everything felt forced. The author was clearly hinting at the fact that Brandon was going to reject Amelia’s confession because he is too focused on getting stronger but instead Brandon magically forgets about all reasoning and accepts Rachel. He was also hinting at the fact that Brandon had feelings for Amelia but again forced narrative with Rachel happened. Also Rachel randomly decides to follow Brandon and overhears their conversation when the sound barrier ended. What happened to supplying mana to the sound barrier haha. And also how did Brandon not notice Rachel following her and did Rachel really think that Brandon would go on a date to a shady place like that? Clearly the author got lazy and just decided to write sloppy narratives. The author also made Rachel dislikable and I’m sure he knew what he was doing aswell haha. I’ve read enough of these types of novel to see where this is going aswell. I’ve only read until the syndactive part but here are my predictions. Predictions: 1.Brandon’s memories aren’t his own and have been transplanted into him. He’s probably going to have an identity crisis later on. 2. Somehow Brandon is going to end up going into the rift and find that everyone inside is still alive. And save them together with the other main cast. 3. Raven is somehow related to Brandon’s memories and so are lucien and jin. 4. The syndicate is bigger than the current plot suggests. 5. Brandon starts to question reality and his friendships and also his previous life memories. Basically he questions if anything is even real.

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TheEnforcer

"Extra's Descent" by Athex is a captivating light novel that stands out in the genre of transmigration and fantasy1 . The story follows Brandon Locke, who finds himself transmigrated into his favorite novel1 . Armed with knowledge of the future, Brandon navigates this new world, facing challenges and uncovering secrets along the way1 . The novel excels in several areas: Writing Quality: The writing style is simple yet engaging, making it easy to follow and enjoy1 . Update Stability: The author consistently updates the story, keeping readers hooked with regular new chapters1 . Story Development: What initially seems like a generic plot unfolds into a well-crafted narrative with unexpected twists and turns1 . Character Design: The characters are well-developed, each with their own unique traits and growth arcs1 . Overall, "Extra's Descent" is a gem hidden in plain sight, offering a refreshing take on the transmigration trope1 . If you're a fan of fantasy and adventure, this novel is definitely worth a read!

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Theo_Murray

I’ve only read about 120 chapters, but PLEASE do not make Amelia his gf. Rachel has to be the fl or imma jump off a bridge. PLEASE MAKE RACHEL THE FL

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Puth_Sokbundith

is mc going to use only curse power? i'm chapter 233 and i love this novel Please continue this masterpiece.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Loving it]

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DONT_TOUCH_ME

I've finished until chapter 45 and I absolutely adore how you write!! ( ˶ˆᗜˆ˵ ) I came across in this novel out of curiosity because your cover is sooooo catchy! And I didn't regret reading it. Will continue to farm on your chapters! I'm not sure how to rate this without spoiling anything so I will be just vaugue in my review Starting: Veryyy good! Every chapter is addicting, I like the humor. Characters: MC wasn't bland, nor the typical kind of mc. He adapts well and I like how his mind works. That goes the same with other characters! Pacing and writing: Perfect pacing and perfect writing!! I am a fan on how you write! Keep up the good work! I will probably re read this again since I feel like I am missing some details (,,>ヮ<,,)!

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Direxts

This novel is really just something to pass the time when you have nothing else to read, which is a shame because it has so much potential. There are a lot of good ideas here, but they’re not fully realized. Spoilers ahead World-Building: There’s not much detail given. It’s mentioned that there are different continents, but there’s almost no information about the relationships, culture, or society within them. The main character (MC) lives in an empire on one of these continents, but there’s never any information about the imperial family or the empire’s hierarchy. There are supposedly great, influential families, but in practice, they don’t really matter. For example, someone from one of the wealthiest families is kidnapped, but neither the authorities nor the family seems to care—only the MC and the “hero” of the story take action, which makes little sense. In another instance, people and children are disappearing in an imperial town, yet no one seems to be doing anything about it. Even when a professor from the continent’s most prestigious academy calls for help, no one acts, causing unnecessary suffering. The problem is so easy to solve that it feels more like a Fallout-style experiment to see how the town would react to disappearances without any government support. Writing: I won’t delve into this too much because English isn’t my native language, so I might not notice things that native speakers would pick up on. But as far as I can tell, the writing is understandable, and I don’t get lost while reading, which is definitely a plus. Story Development: The pacing is inconsistent—it starts slow, then speeds up, then slows down again, and so on, making it feel like a rollercoaster. The story itself is interesting—not bad, but not particularly great either. There are storylines that make you want to know more, and others that you just wish would end. Characters: I have mixed feelings here. At first, the characters feel flat—not really interesting but not terrible either. Then, they start showing signs of development, like when one of the “main” characters acts classist toward the MC because his rank is too low, even though he’s hanging out with high-ranking people. Later, the MC outperforms her in a competition, and you see her regret her previous attitude. This makes you curious about how her character will develop… but instead, she just apologizes and quickly returns to her original behavior. The biggest issue, though, is with the MC himself. All the elements around him are intriguing: his entry into this world, the mysteries of the previous owner of his body, and why he was chosen to transmigrate. But the MC himself feels uninspired. He doesn’t learn, doesn’t grow, and keeps making the same mistakes. He comes up with plans that fail, blames himself, promises not to rely solely on knowing the novel anymore, then goes right back to doing the same thing. Even when he realizes that his knowledge doesn’t help much—because the world he’s in may resemble the novel, but it isn’t one—he rarely adapts or uses his knowledge strategically. He doesn’t try to recruit people who could be valuable allies in the future, nor does he look for artifacts that might benefit him. He doesn’t try to improve in any way; instead, he relies on a system that’s practically useless and rarely helps. Later on, when he gains the previous Brandon’s knowledge—which includes the experience of hundreds of attempts, alternative realities, and more—it’s like he learns nothing from it. Even though it’s mentioned that the previous Brandon was a genius at mana control and magical study, the MC doesn’t use any of that knowledge. He just calls the previous Brandon a failure for not being able to save the world in all those tries, even though he himself hasn’t achieved anything but failures, only surviving due to protective armor.

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Aziz_Yaakoubi

good novel, but very badly made mc. every thing he does he thinks about the main plot despite knowing that it was ruined when he transmigrated. and always stuck with the main cast so defined undeserving of the word extra in the title name. The other characters give a one dimensional feeling, making it hard to imagine their existence without the mc in the image, they lack substance. the original body's backstory is very cliche being the typical foresight and what follows it. finally the mc's relationship with the original family is weird, cringe and random, sometimes he sees them as strangers and others times he accepts them and opens himself up. also the fact that he stayed in the academy is illogical, he is not being taught anything, even tho he is Evelyn's protege, nothing is shown, no improvement despite going through a whole semester, he is only getting stronger through system, the academy existence for him is a literal waste of time.

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ArkVerma

Although I'm not completely caught up, this is amazing!! You're cooking hard man🔥🔥,

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IronCobra

It was a bit of a bumpy ride but omg so worth it, can’t believe this story is so good Was hesitant to spend for a bit but man I’ve been hooked and still want more

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Entrail_JI

This will reach the peak. 🥰 I saw this randomly in my feed and saw the author so I thought I would write this to encourage them. Writing looks great so good luck!

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Tsukasa0

Hola!. I'm here to give a review on one of my favorite novels I read right now on this platform. This is a complete honest review from me as a reader who is caught up with non privilege, and my position as a moderator of this novel has nothing to do with it. Let's start with the obvious. Of course arriving on this novel you might think it's a good old cliche exta novel, but I beg to differ that ITS NOT. In no way does the protagonist hide his power or try to keep the maincast away. He is not weak either as he is quick to catch up to the main cast. Story wise, this is a complete different route from the extra genre though I do agree that some starting chapters are similar, but lets be honest. Don't we all expect the starting to be similar in an extra novel. The character development of characters is very good, and though you might hate the author in some mini arcs for example the cultural festival, please stop being an average wn reader and read further to see why he did that. The characters are neither too flushed out or just blatantly dry. If they are, then that's just something that author develops further. The pacing of the novel is perfect as well, its neither too slow nor too fast. Which is also one of the main reasons why I love this novel. The plot of the novel is really different from extra novels and I mean it. In the normal cliche novels where the extra just has to kill demons, this is quite different as there are further things that come on later into the story. The author also perfectly sets emotions, depth and character development at each plot point. The stability of updates is something you absolutely don't need to worry about as author updates 2 chaps daily while also doing mass releases time to time. Overall, I highly recommend this novel to everyone and I would really hope that they give this a try and find out for yourself that this is infact not glazing and an actual honest review of the novel.

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kadiyan_himesh

Did author drop the novel or its just on hiatus.........?

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Roronoa_Zoro_5937

u goddamn idiot author why did u break up amelia and Brandon it wasn't enough for rachel but now amelia?😭😭🤬🤬😡👿 just pls make sure that she makes up with him again i can't bear to see a perfect story's mc's gf to end with someone else I beg you, if you are continuing this story just make sure that amelia has to end up with Brandon only.. I don't care how many days it takes when you write again, pls just don't destroy the best couple of the story by stopping your work my mentality is being destroyed just by thinking about it

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Ancient_Lost

Damn, where do I start? Ah yes the protagonist, this is the third time I've tried to read this, initially I dropped it at chapter 130, and the second time I gave up even before that milestone, reading again I reached the middle of chapter 200, the protagonist simply goes from one extreme to the other and decides to call others failures hahahahaah is it serious? Original Brandon or failed Jin? hahahahah I'm going to chapter 400 and if that doesn't improve I'm just going to give up on this

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Bastard_00_00

Is this book dropped author?....plz reply

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Obeylisk

This is just too bland and nonsensical. Why are you guys misleading? I wasted my time thanks for the reviews, read it untill 90 or something. It doesn’t get any better.

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Megatrix123

Ok, so I started reading this book in the first few days when I found a webnovel and it was easily one of the best novels I have read to date. I already caught up to the latest chapters and I have to say it's amazing the plot, the characters, and their interactions are just so well-crafted and it very amazing but I have to say that the first few chapters did have a few dumb scenes and I understand that you were going for a more funny approach at that time but still it is peak. Now for the best part of the character development, it's easily the best how the character goes from a basic character to a fascinating character with many layers and that's my review. And for the amazing novel here is a 5-star

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roshan3756

When can we expect a new chapter, considering it's been a month and the author is working on a new novel? The author's other work is great, but we can't wait for a new chapter for this novel.

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MugoxNR

It follows the same path as other stories in the EXTRA genre, but the protagonist's personality leaves something to be desired, even the part I read (chapter 50) and the construction of both the world and the other characters seems dull. There are interesting things but I wasn't interested enough to continue reading (via Google Translate)

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Ashborn_3522

ummmm, so. ..... will it continue or will it drop ????

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Fellow_Daoist_1902

It is an intriguing read, quite different from other novels with this setting. The planning and foresight also make it significantly better, making it feel much more like a polished novel than most entries on this platform, especially in this genre. The character designs are great; I personally loved how they've been written. To make everyone feel like their own entity, despite some barely participating in proceedings, is not an easy task by any measure. The mental health of most characters in situations similar to these is often ignored, but the author does well to not only include it but also make it look natural. There are quite a few grammatical errors and some repeated errors. It's still better than average webnovel quality, but this work is good enough for me to evaluate as a proper novel, rather than a webnovel entry, so I'm holding it to higher standards. However, I was disappointed by some of the writing. While this work loosely follows the vein of a tragedy, with the protagonist suffering throughout, the plot choices sometimes make it feel forced. Midway through a particular arc, the story becomes needlessly convoluted, with the revelations surrounding Jin and Brandon Locke not landing an impact. Even 400-odd chapters later, there are more questions than answers, and nothing is known about the main disaster that Brandon seems to be preparing so fervently to face. The author keeps introducing new variables in the story, while unexplored plotlines still remain, perhaps in a worse state than when they were introduced.  With all that said, it's definitely worth exploring, if only for the interesting world built by the author.

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Heat_Cando

I was a bit disappointed at the start, per-say but hmm... The start in the end was just a build-up for the whole plot. Yea I can definitely agree with the mods that this book is nice. Everything is fleshed out, author isn't afraid to do something(heh death), every character has a purpose and non forgotten. Very well written author. What else can I say?hmmm I reccomend this book, but it definitely isn't an "extra" genre novel lol.

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Tls12
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Me who still thought Rachel is the FML......[img=Your move]

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Slj91
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Well, the novel had a good promise at the beginning, but as the story moved foraward, the character development, plot and world building became an utter mess. Honestly, there’s so many plot wholes and attempts to patch it up that have gone wrong that by the time you’re reading around the 250th chapter, it seems you’ve read four different novels that have been mixed up and created a chimera novel. That’s a big downside with daily novels, due to the daily uploads, the authors disregard any framework for the story to be of a good quality.

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Shinigami_Thefool

i read till chapter 171 it was all good but the moment i saw the wiki and sa that his love interest will change from rachelle to amellia, i decided to drop it, i do love romance to be included in action fantasy novels but what i hate the most is harem and ntr genre , but even while im dropping it but for people who have no problem with harem an ntr them its a good story as far as chapter 171

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Vortex_876

Story is Great. But sometimes some parts are annoying, like the thing with Brandon and Rachel. Great story but Author forgot to add Dense MC tag. I am on chapter 133. Let me know who is the FL and if Brandon gonna stay Dense?

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Salem_Zaed

It’s good, I just dislike onething that is the Mc always somehow will be beaten up by someone stronger, it feel like the author hate Mc and just keep beating him up, and why didn’t the mc already create a regeneration skill, how many time was he beaten up and yet he never created one it seem stupid to me.

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Humanchaos

I've finished until chapter 114 and I absolutely adore how you write!! ( ˶ˆᗜˆ˵ ) I came across in this novel out of curiosity because your cover is sooooo catchy! And I didn't regret reading it. Will continue to farm on your chapters! I'm not sure how to rate this without spoiling anything so I will be just vaugue in my review

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Christian_Lynch

this is PEAK i love the story so far on chapter 290 the mc has went through alot of development the side characters like raven aint get much but they are developing slowly i love the 10000 regression plotline alot and how coleblooded and insane he has become after it all and i LOVE amelia 2nd fav character after brandon

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Daoist_God_

SIMPLY THE PEAK WN OF ALL TIME.... CHECK IT OUT RN

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Bestkid_12

We've been waiting for an update???? 😞 besides that this was an amazing book it has been a while since I found a book with this much depth to the characters and the plot

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radioactive_jig0l0

i read this story with great anticipation till chapter 16 but regret fullt, this is utter trash, many events does not even make sense , i don't even know why this has reached 2.2 million views, maybe people like this trash? . i don't know but if you are wondering whether you should read it or not. just don't.

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Najeebullah_Khan

This was good until about chapter 137 when the author got Rachel involved in the whole syndicate plot. After that everything felt forced. The author was clearly hinting at the fact that Brandon was going to reject Amelia’s confession because he is too focused on getting stronger but instead Brandon magically forgets about all reasoning and accepts Rachel. He was also hinting at the fact that Brandon had feelings for Amelia but again forced narrative with Rachel happened. Also Rachel randomly decides to follow Brandon and overhears their conversation when the sound barrier ended. What happened to supplying mana to the sound barrier haha. And also how did Brandon not notice Rachel following her and did Rachel really think that Brandon would go on a date to a shady place like that? Clearly the author got lazy and just decided to write sloppy narratives. The author also made Rachel dislikable and I’m sure he knew what he was doing aswell haha. I’ve read enough of these types of novel to see where this is going aswell. I’ve only read until the syndactive part but here are my predictions. Predictions: 1.Brandon’s memories aren’t his own and have been transplanted into him. He’s probably going to have an identity crisis later on. 2. Somehow Brandon is going to end up going into the rift and find that everyone inside is still alive. And save them together with the other main cast. 3. Raven is somehow related to Brandon’s memories and so are lucien and jin. 4. The syndicate is bigger than the current plot suggests. 5. Brandon starts to question reality and his friendships and also his previous life memories. Basically he questions if anything is even real.

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TheEnforcer

"Extra's Descent" by Athex is a captivating light novel that stands out in the genre of transmigration and fantasy1 . The story follows Brandon Locke, who finds himself transmigrated into his favorite novel1 . Armed with knowledge of the future, Brandon navigates this new world, facing challenges and uncovering secrets along the way1 . The novel excels in several areas: Writing Quality: The writing style is simple yet engaging, making it easy to follow and enjoy1 . Update Stability: The author consistently updates the story, keeping readers hooked with regular new chapters1 . Story Development: What initially seems like a generic plot unfolds into a well-crafted narrative with unexpected twists and turns1 . Character Design: The characters are well-developed, each with their own unique traits and growth arcs1 . Overall, "Extra's Descent" is a gem hidden in plain sight, offering a refreshing take on the transmigration trope1 . If you're a fan of fantasy and adventure, this novel is definitely worth a read!

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Theo_Murray

I’ve only read about 120 chapters, but PLEASE do not make Amelia his gf. Rachel has to be the fl or imma jump off a bridge. PLEASE MAKE RACHEL THE FL

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Puth_Sokbundith

is mc going to use only curse power? i'm chapter 233 and i love this novel Please continue this masterpiece.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Loving it]

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DONT_TOUCH_ME

I've finished until chapter 45 and I absolutely adore how you write!! ( ˶ˆᗜˆ˵ ) I came across in this novel out of curiosity because your cover is sooooo catchy! And I didn't regret reading it. Will continue to farm on your chapters! I'm not sure how to rate this without spoiling anything so I will be just vaugue in my review Starting: Veryyy good! Every chapter is addicting, I like the humor. Characters: MC wasn't bland, nor the typical kind of mc. He adapts well and I like how his mind works. That goes the same with other characters! Pacing and writing: Perfect pacing and perfect writing!! I am a fan on how you write! Keep up the good work! I will probably re read this again since I feel like I am missing some details (,,>ヮ<,,)!

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Direxts

This novel is really just something to pass the time when you have nothing else to read, which is a shame because it has so much potential. There are a lot of good ideas here, but they’re not fully realized. Spoilers ahead World-Building: There’s not much detail given. It’s mentioned that there are different continents, but there’s almost no information about the relationships, culture, or society within them. The main character (MC) lives in an empire on one of these continents, but there’s never any information about the imperial family or the empire’s hierarchy. There are supposedly great, influential families, but in practice, they don’t really matter. For example, someone from one of the wealthiest families is kidnapped, but neither the authorities nor the family seems to care—only the MC and the “hero” of the story take action, which makes little sense. In another instance, people and children are disappearing in an imperial town, yet no one seems to be doing anything about it. Even when a professor from the continent’s most prestigious academy calls for help, no one acts, causing unnecessary suffering. The problem is so easy to solve that it feels more like a Fallout-style experiment to see how the town would react to disappearances without any government support. Writing: I won’t delve into this too much because English isn’t my native language, so I might not notice things that native speakers would pick up on. But as far as I can tell, the writing is understandable, and I don’t get lost while reading, which is definitely a plus. Story Development: The pacing is inconsistent—it starts slow, then speeds up, then slows down again, and so on, making it feel like a rollercoaster. The story itself is interesting—not bad, but not particularly great either. There are storylines that make you want to know more, and others that you just wish would end. Characters: I have mixed feelings here. At first, the characters feel flat—not really interesting but not terrible either. Then, they start showing signs of development, like when one of the “main” characters acts classist toward the MC because his rank is too low, even though he’s hanging out with high-ranking people. Later, the MC outperforms her in a competition, and you see her regret her previous attitude. This makes you curious about how her character will develop… but instead, she just apologizes and quickly returns to her original behavior. The biggest issue, though, is with the MC himself. All the elements around him are intriguing: his entry into this world, the mysteries of the previous owner of his body, and why he was chosen to transmigrate. But the MC himself feels uninspired. He doesn’t learn, doesn’t grow, and keeps making the same mistakes. He comes up with plans that fail, blames himself, promises not to rely solely on knowing the novel anymore, then goes right back to doing the same thing. Even when he realizes that his knowledge doesn’t help much—because the world he’s in may resemble the novel, but it isn’t one—he rarely adapts or uses his knowledge strategically. He doesn’t try to recruit people who could be valuable allies in the future, nor does he look for artifacts that might benefit him. He doesn’t try to improve in any way; instead, he relies on a system that’s practically useless and rarely helps. Later on, when he gains the previous Brandon’s knowledge—which includes the experience of hundreds of attempts, alternative realities, and more—it’s like he learns nothing from it. Even though it’s mentioned that the previous Brandon was a genius at mana control and magical study, the MC doesn’t use any of that knowledge. He just calls the previous Brandon a failure for not being able to save the world in all those tries, even though he himself hasn’t achieved anything but failures, only surviving due to protective armor.

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Aziz_Yaakoubi

good novel, but very badly made mc. every thing he does he thinks about the main plot despite knowing that it was ruined when he transmigrated. and always stuck with the main cast so defined undeserving of the word extra in the title name. The other characters give a one dimensional feeling, making it hard to imagine their existence without the mc in the image, they lack substance. the original body's backstory is very cliche being the typical foresight and what follows it. finally the mc's relationship with the original family is weird, cringe and random, sometimes he sees them as strangers and others times he accepts them and opens himself up. also the fact that he stayed in the academy is illogical, he is not being taught anything, even tho he is Evelyn's protege, nothing is shown, no improvement despite going through a whole semester, he is only getting stronger through system, the academy existence for him is a literal waste of time.

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ArkVerma

Although I'm not completely caught up, this is amazing!! You're cooking hard man🔥🔥,

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IronCobra

It was a bit of a bumpy ride but omg so worth it, can’t believe this story is so good Was hesitant to spend for a bit but man I’ve been hooked and still want more

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