/ Fantasy / Echoes Of Genesis: Regression of a Pariah
摘要
After her passing, Ionia regresses to a time prior to her awakening, when she was ridiculed by others as a stain on her family's name.
Reuniting with her distant father and facing a circle of family, allies, and foes who once derided her, Ionia is determined to shed her past identity as a ‘trash’.
With only a few years before the world's impending catastrophe, her knowledge of the future makes her the sole contender to challenge the cataclysms.
“…Defy thy fate or forever be ridiculed...”
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EXCERPT:
"Oh? Trash, you say? That's me, no doubt,” She declared with casual indifference, a glint of smugness in her eyes. “But I'm not your ordinary kind!”
With a swift kick, she sent the Venom AR soaring through the air, effortlessly catching it with a sleek maneuver.
Adjusting the cutting-edge nano-scope, Ionia Asteria inspected the ammunition cartridges.
The semblance of a half-cocky smirk played at the corner of her lips as she beckoned to herself, proclaiming, "And guess what? This 'overpowered trash' right here is about to grant you hell!”
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寫檢討作者 VoidCrafter
At the beginning, you explained the conflict and the depiction of the situation very neatly. In the small debate part, it was also very well done. The way you wrote Ionia's somewhat annoying (to me) attitude was surprisingly meticulous and detailed. The short battle was also very beautiful. A hundred points for you! 💯🌟