"This is my second novel that I've submitted for the December WPC contest. Please help me by adding it to your collection, and feel free to provide feedback if anything is lacking. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
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thsank
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arigato
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thanks
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Actually, the storyline is good and easy to understand, but the issue lies in your writing. Try to change your writing and learn more vocabulary. But overall, the story is good.
This novel is currently participating in the WPC December contest, so I kindly ask for your continuous support for it. Thank you ;)
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do you want to exchange reviews and collections with me? take it easy, I will definitely do the same
thank you for the review, I have also included your novel in my collection, I hope you keep the spirit of writing
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want to exchange reviews and collections with me? take it easy, I will definitely do the same
Review and criticism are welcome here. Perhaps the main complaint is about the poor English grammar, I know. Until now, I am still trying to learn and improve. Hopefully, I can get better.As for the novel, there might be some chapters that are very sensitive and contrary to certain beliefs, but believe me, this is all fiction and has no connection to real events.