摘要
[BeforeReadingThisNovelPleaseReadThisNote:The MC has received the system,but that doesn't mean he will become an OP character and smart guy.And if you want a Quick OP guy,then I am sorry to disappoint you,this novel is not meant for you. Here,it will take some time [100-150chapters] for the MC to become OP and then he will slowly transform from a naive and stupid character to a quickwitted,sly,OP and ruthless [maybe] character.So, if you can bear with the Mc's stupidity and weakness for 100-130 chapters, then I would appreciate your patience. So,please don't judge the story or Mc's stupid decisions(whichwillbejustifiedlater) when you just read some 15-20 chapters and affect the ratings.]
(MC's name is Raj Who changes his name to Orochi later in the story.)
Raj/Orochi is reincarnated into the world of cultivation. He is excited to be reborn in an anime world which he has always dreamt about. After being reincarnated he is excited to become strong and have a harem with beautiful women. MC is born in a strong clan too so he thinks it will be easy.
And yes, everything was going easy and peaceful until the day his talent was tested.
then.......
Everything changed,
His family, brother, sister, fiancee all abandoned him, his friends betrayed him and his cultivation was abolished by his enemies and was thrown into the forest to die.
All the anger, resentment, despair overloads his brain and something clicks in his mind and an RPG style window appears in front of his eyes.
He remembered the most important thing in the cultivation world that is 'strength and talent is what matters in this world.'
Now, what will he do? Will he become strong and gain his clan's appreciation? Will he have his revenge or will he be indifferent to all his past and start a new life? Will he become a hero or anti-hero?
Follow Raj's/Orochi's Adventure in the cultivation world.
Note:
This novel will contain 18+ content, so if you are below 18, I would suggest you not to read this novel.
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Don't waste your time. Every 5 star review it's fake. It's just the author and his other accounts. I like reading new books to give honest reviews and this is the first time I will rate without reading because the authors behavior has disgusted me and if anyone has the means to reach app managers to shut this clown show down. Please do. BTW Author how old are to do something so dumb. Spamming reviews to raise your ratings? Let the readers decide.
I'm So so MAD! fucking MC so So Sooooooo stupid what's the Use of shop function when you don't buy antidote???????? it's already at chapter 40+ and the fucking poison was not removed why are you so stupid? if I'm there I'll fucking kill the MC on the spot
The only thing I dislike about this novel is that the MC is super stupid. He does such basic mistake even in the late part of the story. If not for the plot Armor he would have died 100 times.
I noticed that the author seems to give Themselves multiple 5/star reviews. which in my opinion shouldn’t be allowed. ive also noticed other reviewers have posted almost the same thing as the author which makes me think its the author on another account.
I love this novel. development of mc is very good. Though I don't like his name. most characters have western names who lives in eastern world. mc has indian name which I like. but then he chooses Japanese name. I think if you had chosen Japanese names first, which shows that his mind is stuck in the anime world, nd then chose a villainous name like ravan, or shakuni, or kans. it would have been amazing. raj is a fine name too. but orochi name just doesn't feel right. I remember reading 1 novel which also had the concept of mc using stats in cultivation world, but it failed in the story department. but this one is pretty good. it takes time and the development is realistic. I specially love the indian references. are you gujarati too like me?? And I appreciate the effort you put in for the lore behind monsters. But I would like to say that you move on from the first arc soon. bcz i feel like we have spent too much time here. it is time for mc to explore. also, don't make the loli girl harem member. and if you do, then don't make it loli. she feels like a child to me. if she matures then I don't have a problem. keep up the good work. I'm supporting you with power stones. I would give at least 1 power stone to you everyday.
I really like the novel. start of the novel was quite bad but its get better and better as the novel progresses. I really hope author doesn't drop the novel.
character is to stupid, and the early life gets rushed through with the writer spending more time trying to justify his stupidity than be writing a believable character
man said Mc gonna be stupid makes mistakes and stuff you did not say man gonna be stupid as in young masters ancestor stupid man doing the most stupidest things for a 15 year old and still did not figure out that everyone hates him this is why character development should start somewhere but not from here
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A good betrayal system novel worth reading. I have seen that many are spamming with bad reviews but on the contrary it is many times better than the novels trending now. Most of the novels are cliche and this is different from them. Also most people are saying mc should do that, do this but what you have to understand is mc is not you. Mc is a unique individual so he may make good or bad decision and thinks different than you. so dont spam author saying he should do that and this. I hope author will continue to write this novel and your writing quality has improved as chapters increased. The reason i gave 5 stars even though it doesn't deserve it is because it is unique and different from cliche novels and has a good world building, character development
Everything is good but story is very slow paced . starting was amazing snd by far one of my top story development but it is very slow !!,! Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .
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for those who are reading this comment, I would like make a small note... people are posting comments like... I could not continue reading after 37 chapter...or bad English... or MC is stupid and lame....so before you believe them...you should give it try, I mean i too have read comments and then gave up few novels because of bad review...but when I read them...I found that they were so awesome...what I am trying to say is everyone has different tastes and likes... as for different negative comments... people are expecting op mc in the first 30 chapters then what's the use of writing long stories...novel are all about story development, how mc goes from an ant to dragon...if you expect and instant op then please go and read those short stories with 20-30 chapters....as for stupid actions of mc, it is a part of character development...
Bad grammar. hurts my eyes when there are no punctuations. Stupid MC, Naive, gullible, idiotic, not intelligent, low EQ. terrible at describing things, No plot, bad plot for the sake of story progression, Low level NPC, English names in an indian kingdom, only the MC has indian name. The system is glitching, has many errors, inferior system, Experience is wrong, shows less stat points
I got to 38 and iam tired of the stupid stuff it had amazing potential but I Just don’t think this author is the right one for it and Breaking the 4 th wall sucks on my opinion
The MC's power level are inconsistent, in the begining he was able to defeat a high level opponents, as he gains more levels and stats he was finding it harder to defeat his opponents, the author doesn't explain how the stats are related to the cultivation level, he was able to defeat some mid level opponents with his stats below 10, when his stats are 100+ he was having trouble with the same level of enemies
to start this off properly I have to preface this with I haven't read this book yet I just wanted to say something to the author. you said roughly that the mc will start off weak and not to expect him to power level, i'm fine with that as long as his abilities are either interesting and or well explored. a example of this is the dao of magic it takes a already interesting and IMO ability/power cultivation and explores it rather thoroughly. the reason this is relavent is because "to me at least" this is one of the major draws to a op fan fiction almost instant access to cool abilities/powers to explore. this acts as a really good hook to get people to stay and continue reading especially on fan fic sites, because you most probably won't find people who care about the story or character development as long as the mc doesn't make them want to throw up in repulsion. ps sorry if this comes out as a big block of text I wrote this on my phone I tried to make it not one but I can only hope it worked.
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The book is good and I can see that this author is inexperienced but kudos to you for at least starting something and hope you keep up the good work 🤩🤩🤩🤩
Maybe the story got better after 30 chapters, but I couldn't keep reading. The whole world hates MC for no reason, yet MC somehow doesn't notice it for 15 years. His decisions are super weird. Instead of buying a potion to cure himself of poison, he buys 2 space storages. like WTF is going on?