/ Eastern / Primordial Harem System
摘要
Shen Yuan, a normal human who was living his life peacefully on earth died mysteriously, only to get reincarnated into the world of cultivation with an unknown bloodline so powerful that it even surpassed his chest system.\
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"Hmm, looks like becoming an alchemist might be good. System, purchase the Alchemy knowledge."
[Ding!]
[Congratulations Host, for acquiring Heaven Refining Alchemy Sutra.]
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Follow to see the journey of how Shen Yuan creates the strongest harem since the Primordial times to journey the three thousand world.
Warning!
NO RAPE/NO NTR!/Harem/
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From what i can tell, this is the first critical review - lets get into it Ill start with two massive issues I have. This may save some of you from wasting your time immedietly. 1. The MC tells his mom that he is a reincarnator in the beginning of the story. - seemed forced too. The authors preference, but there are a ton like me who hate that stuff. 2. Due to some “issue” the MC acts like a complete shy simp. This is suppose to end at 18 years old but honestly seems hard to stomach the more I read. - its the kind of shy where the MC gets red over the smallest things. Japanese simp vibe smh Other than that, so far the story is fairly good. world building progresses the more he grows stronger. Also, hes supposedly pretty OP. If the two issues dont bother you, id suggest you read this. Otherwise, you may want to pass this one up.
Hello Author, I have a question Is the MC here the same as your other novel whete the MC was stupid and dumb and not even overpowerd as you've said that's what I've seen from reading 20 chapters in it and this was annoying Please don't take offense I just don't want to read smth I won't enjoy others might like it.
As promised. My reasons for giving this 5 star have already been posted in chapter comments. If you want, go read them. Or don't. But whatever you choose, do yourself a favor and read this novel.
I read the description and this looks pretty good... I think ill give it a try but the only thing that sucks is that the MC has to leave his mother and sister on earth... it would be cool if they can go with him... but Ill still give it shot because it looks pretty cool
You have great talent in writing, very interesting read this story is, and hope you update your Naruto story soon.
first of all, i am not a paid reader, so I won't be able to read paid chaps. but from what i have read in free 37 chaps, the novel has potential. a huge amount of dormant potential, about to be unleashed by author (idk which type of potential, iykyk). so i recomend you give this one a try. and it will be a treat for Harem genre lovers. I hope there will be some lemons in next chapters when I purchase them.
My previous review got deleted for some reason... Anyways, you guys can ask if you have any questions about the novel. We are already past chap 100 now.