摘要
A person from our world dies and is reincarnated in the Dragon Ball universe as the Saiyan Raditz brother of Goku. The new Raditz is determined to leave his mark on the universe and not be forgotten like the original Raditz.
Note: This work is a fanfic I do not own any part of the Dragon Ball franchise or any other mentioned works. Please support the official franchise by giving Akira Toriyama all your monies.
Special Thanks to Amos Anon, Drezek, and Nina
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I have been binge reading this story since I got off work this afternoon. I am truly loving it, I mean a few things early on were minor plot holes but all in all this is a truly amazing story so far
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This novel is great it needs to up there in the 100's. It has an acceptable release rate. Strongly recommend. We want more chapters so give your stones.
I am rather intrigued by the concept of this story. But it seems the main character often forgets that he was reincarnated which is slightly upsetting.
This fan pic is great!!! I've read loads of dbf fan pics but none of them have the post picolo and pre freeze sagas. the best part? the author isn't scared to mix it up a little the MC natural changes how things pay out and is comfortable with it(still cautious enough not to be on powerful peoples radar like beers or any god for that matter). Auther love what u did with goku this version is so much better than the rest wish this version could be in the anime oh and love the length of the chapters not too long or too short right in the sweet spot =) Anyways thanks for writing this i look forward to reading more plz don't drop most dbf fan fics drop around chapter 30ish
My own first review. Man this is tough, guess all that can be said is check it out. This story is one persons journey through the world of Dragon Ball and how far he can go as the Saiyan Raditz
This novel is great...its now my second greatest dbs..dbz novel to reread over and over...I practically binged read everything in three days.. It would be awesome to see more updates of this and see how far it actually goes into story development and to see non canon and canon characters appear
Good story but I personally don’t like it. He’s weaker than he should be. It seems like Zenkai boosts do little or nothing and he doesn’t take advantage of this trait + senzu beans to power up.
I love this story with its setting,plot,characters,and main idea. My favorite character in dragon ball z would have to be Raditz,I just hated that they got rid of him that quick in the manga and anime. I love this story please keep it up.
I love this story with its setting,plot charactersand main idea of the story. I like raditz as a character and with he didn't diez in the anime and manga.
Uma ótima fanfic, comecei a ler ser proposito e terminei em uma noite! Estou ancioso para os proximos capitulos... Por favor continue! *-* Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ....!!!!
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It's a very good story so far the only complaint I have is that some important parts are skipped besides that very good story keep up the good work.
This is really well done. The storyline is the right level of different, but still close enough to the original that you appreciate the time and effort the author is putting into this novel while paying tribute to the original.
muy buena hitoria[img=recomendar] ....................................................................... Espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo
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the idea of raditz being the protagonist is very good, but I don't understand how the author tries to make him weak; With all the knowledge that the reincarnated protagonist has, in all those years that he spent training with kami he could have used them better, such as giving shi** to dr. brief in exchange for a gravity room or request it to shen long, he could have traveled to yadrat or metamor to train in his techniques, visit the great patriot .......