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A man who died at old age was reincarnated in TDG world due to his karmic point. How will our MC changes the event that takes places in Glory city.
Will he go with the flow? or
Will he change it with his own hands?
with OP MC.
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Horrible writing, constant out of context references, and borderline retarded MC makes this a story you'll want to drop in the first few chaps...
when i read synopsis no this page, i think is a good story at least. but when i read from prologue until chapter 17. i think its really bad story. there are reason why i said that: 1 writing quality is bad-mediocre even author said it has been revised. in first chapter, author describe progress of MC. sound good right, but really?? to me it was bad bad bad. majority reason i calling it was bad because there is REALLY LACK of dialogue between MC and other, except dialogue between mc and god. what do you think, is it still really good story when there is not having even the dialogue. its bad right. solution: try to make EVEN DIALOGUE per chapter at least. 2 stability update is good, dont need evaluation. 3 story development is mediocre at best. mc is granting 3 op wish but. sigh . . . . . why not using your wish to the fullest. and your story is lack of thrill. 4character design is bad-mediocre. the mc has too op abilty but mc is dont know using the power to the fullest. solution: why not trying remake your story with this 3 wish: a. complete the gamer ability from Book 1 of the Gamer Series: This Is My Life As The Gamer! (Rewrite Version). [gamer body, gamer mind, fictional adaptation and bunch of fictional story incluiding game, novel and film] b. boosted gear with abilty boosting the concept (even effect of item, pill, etc) c. kaleindoscope. which if you combine with boosted gear, you can traveling time and another universe.
This started pretty decent but has started to get more and more ridiculous as it goes along. Powers and transformation don’t make sense for the level the MC’s supposedly at, MC gets abilities that defy the laws of the world, so on and so forth... If you’re a fan of Tales of Demons and Gods, this fan-fic will probably leave you disappointed. If you’re looking for a novel about an OP MC and don’t want to think about if anything makes sense...meh, might as well try it.
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Re Wright?!!!🤔 lol 🤣when I read it, still the same as the old one,waste of time,😏.................................................................................
Honestly couldn't bear to read this after a couple of chapters, checked ahead and still the same problems. Why is everything in past tense and 3rd person? Don't have anything else to day since I didn't make it further. Wish you the best though even if this wasn't for me.
It's bad. Plain and ******. Its writing quality is absolutely abysmal and is unable to show any sense of coherency whatsoever. The novel's flow is worse than a stationary rock, as it reads like a set of statements horribly conjoined together. The multitude of grammatical errors kill this novel at a higher rate than measles does in Madagascar. The characters are dry and one dimensional. It's MC is the stereotypical "I train hard with cheats for the good of humanity, I'm never wrong and never corrupted". All the while the side characters blend into background like a chameleon. The world building is next to non-existent. It relies heavily on the reader's own knowledge of the series, and takes little moments to clarify both the setting and characters. At chapter 4, it's tough to truly get a grasp on the story's development. I truly hope the story improves in future chapters. But I know that I won't be there to read them, as these small four chapters were already enough to leave me permanently disappointed.
There is nothing new in this story.. The retarded MC just follows the main plot like an idiot and there are 8 ANNOUNCEMENTS in this f*cking story. That means the author is just raising the chapter count.. Shameless retard auther.
Rewrite? noooooooo! It's really going well. I like the novel. And its going back from the start again? Waiting again for chapters. Tsk! What a waste. 40 40 404040 40 40 40 40 40 40 40
Its a really refreshing take on a fan favorite xianxia novel. I like the way this novel is going. I am looking forward what the author does in the future. I hope he does not drop it unfinished.
I only liked 1st chapter.. about rest it gets Creepy would be a good word as you read chps.. On ch2 author fked low key , no 12yr interaction , and made him too Op for 12 yr old.... On CH3 mc starts bootlicking nieli even when he doesn't gain anything. rest chps are forced plot development.. so I dropped 😖😖😖
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It's a good novel but the thing with his wife reincarnating along him is a little bad but the main problem is his little sister I mean like every novel has a little sister or an older one who do nothing while mc is the only one taking the burden if there was a brother younger or older he would at strive to shoulder the mc's burden
Honestly, the pacing of the story is ****, the plot half assed at best yet it’s not frustrating or boring to read so read it if you’ve got nothing better to do
Looks quite promising, and I really like how hard working the MC is unlike some who just depend on their cheats completely. Also, I would wish the the story won't give a f**k about that pedophilic old monster called Nei lie😤😤. Will be better if it's a harem and include ziyun cause I'm sick of of seeing only Ning'er in almost all fanfics. Ps: keep it up author for your work, you are doing great. Pleaseeeeee just don't drop this
Hate the MC I was promised an OP MC. Do you even know what that means. He is a scaredy cat who is cocky infront of weaker oponnents. Hate him even Nei lie himself is more OP than him in the original.
Latest chapter truly evoke a lot of drama... Although I have to say that LongTian is too harsh on XiaQingYue... First, they are in the wrong here. Then killing without batting an eye is more common than breathing in ATGverse. Also he is punishing her with future stuff that he could easily change with a little nudge here and there like always. In case you need example, his first original Tales of Demon and God world? Hello?.. That is one prime example of him changing fate of ENTIRE WORLD by nudging fate to the right person earlier and smoothen their path... Hitting QingYue is so not you, author mate.. You are the one who write this story, this fanfic of world hopping so you could change their fate, and you just decide to attack QingYue in the first minute? She's a naive little arrogant girl who thought she's the strognest in the town for god sake.. And you are dimension master!! You can alter everyone fate, even knowing about ATG world in and out yet you hit the girl? Come on mate, where is your usual magic of "I'm going to change their fate to better one"?... You had work your magic in TODAG, Martial Universe, and here you suddenly rage like that? I know you can do better mate.. I am writing this here is not to throwing brick at your face, but to remind you that the maim reason you going around world is to amass power and to change the fate of people I'm that universe... Hope you understand what saying here is in good will...
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I love this story for having no Harem! Being able to read such a fanfiction is true happiness. All stories having Mc's having harems, it's annoying. I'm loving it so far, keep it up. Thank You,
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This mc is the same as ne lie! He only have advantage coZ he knows what will happen! Nothing special about him. And he's a coward too He only acts badass when his opponent is weaker than him by a large margin. 😊😊😊😊 he is even scared of ne lie...