摘要
This is a young man of twenty years who was reincarnated in High School DXD carrying with him a system to ascend beyond its limits.
The first time I make a fan-fic note is that some characters will not be present.
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The High School DXD does not belong to me, nor any character.
English is not my language
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4.02
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At the beginning i didn't know what to think but after reading about 60 chapters i really like it. Please continue it until the end. DO NOT DROP IT!!! As i said,i really like it and i'd prefer to read it until the end. Keep up the good work,author!
I really liked this novel, it is rare to find a novel of dxd that is not the same formula repeated 99% of the time. And luckily the mc is not that kind of character with those totally generic personalities of animes. The story is progressing very well, the updates are at a good pace. The only problem was grammar, but it was only in the older chapters, now everything is fine. I recommend it, it's really a good story to spend time reading.
Well, 4.1 is overrated, mostly via Rating bots :(. From what I've seen, the author is from spain and writes in spanish and has little to zero english knowledge. His chapters are machine translated and some early and late ones are edited by another one with a little more english skills. Like most pseudo p*rn authors, the 18+ chapters are written by a virgin who gathered experience by watching po*n. Null Imagination, null seduction. MC gathers his harem members only by being strong. There is zero affection or romance. MC is also an irresponsible asshole. He is about 10 years away from home. Because of circumstances he was unable to return. His parents and brother are worried sick. But MC's thoughts about that are: I've sent them enough Money, they should be happy. So even when he returned, he let his family wait for anothersome weeks just to chase some more skirts. The MC starts as a likeable person with overly responsible behaviour and transforms with time into a typical chinese xianxia asshole MC that is meaninglessly arrogant and kills everyone he doesn't like. It is rather sad to see a Story, that started so promising only with bad grammar and is now at a point with relatively good grammar but shi*ty plot :( The characters have no noticeable personality. Girls see the MC and love him, boys admire or hate him - whatever is better for the plot. But there is nothing special about anyone. If one or two of his wives die, because the author forgets about them, you probably wouldn't even realize it. Writing Quality ** Stability of Updates ***** Story Development ** Character Design ** World Background **** average ***
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A story about what a newly added character can achieve I never liked some anime events and I always had different thoughts than the author ... That's why I decided to make this fan-fic I wanted to express my ideas maybe they are not of their tastes but at least I'm satisfied when I finish it ...
bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic
You should put that english is not your first language! Or just find an editor to fix the wrong typings. My head hurts when i read your story because it feels like watching a video that was chopped and then skipped every 5 seconds.
Story is decently written. I can see that there is potential with the whole 'fixing the plot' troupe and I like it. The writing quality is average with alot of mistakes like alot of stuff on this site. The thing u should work on the most is your pronouns. Like all the women are always 'he' or 'his' when they should be 'she' or 'hers'. Just a thought.
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Weak MC. .. .useless system .. Beta MC. .. .. Spicy Chicken MC. .. .. Naive MC. .. .. Brainless author .. ... .. Fucking shitty trash novel .. .. ..
Cannot read anymore. It's gotten impossible. And the story makes no sense either. he is somehow attracting women who are 4 times his age and it's honestly pissing me off. Some weird pedophile ****. On top of that the grammar is atrocious. So much untranslated and unedited content it's becoming far too hard to read at all. And this is just at 33% through the story at chapter 32. What's next? Full spanish or japanese chapters? No not reading anymore.
Besides few grammatical error, there is no problem in this novel. Original story is quite good. Issei is realistic, MC is badass, and his harem is almost perfect. One of the best thing is that author didn't write many chapters of MC childhood, which I personally hate for wasting time.
The grammar!!!...please fix it!!! I can’t read a good story with bad grammars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 140 words😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
Could be better. The story itself is fine but the grammar hurts. So many mistakes but I can understand that English is not the authors first language but it wouldn’t hurt to use some editor program online to edit the chapters.
Love the story 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Very good novel. I like it. Only grammar is bad, but that’s to be expected from a non English speaker. I really wish someone would edit the chapters. Other than that, keep up the good work! I’ll support you!
Good book don't give up on it.....................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the story a lot though it needs a little bit better Gammer it is a good story and has very good potential. 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😼😻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👍👍✅✅✅✅😍❤️❤️❤️😍😍
Brother, nothing against you, but do you realize that Freezer can wipe out one planet with his finger in its weakest form? But you put here the DB force under the power of DXD? Do not you think that's a little over the top to make the SSJ so weak? Please do it right SSj never loses against Loki so please a little stronger for the DB force.
I know all the him and her is confusing and all that but i have to admit this one of the most fulfilling fanfic i have read and i seriously beg the author not to drop like other's.
Es una historia exelente, y tienes mi apoyo al 100% me encanta, la empeze a leer hoy y voy en el capítulo 29 ... Eh leido comentarios quejándose de algunas faltas gramaticales y me gustaría ofrecerte mi ayuda si aún no tienes alguien que te edite en inglés ya que soy bilingüe, será totalmente gratis, como dije me encanta tu trabajo y espero que no lo dejes, si te interesa por favor contáctame y puedo editar tu trabajo antes que lo postees, claro no es por leerlo antes que nadie claro que no jejeje ares040508@gmail.com este es mi contacto espero que lo consideres como dije no quiero nada a cambio, solo que sigas haciendo un exelente trabajo