/ Eastern / Divine Bunny Emperor
摘要
One Bunny...
One life...
One chance...
It shall conquer the heavens with his might...the powers he held in his hands is unimaginable...the power to wipe out half the universe with just a jump of his legs...
Bunnyyyyy! Bunnyyyyy! Buuuuneyyyyy!
Our protagonist is a common Bunny. Can't cultivate and can't fight...it is doom to died and bully easily in the World of Cultivation but...the moment he was born he acquired a power to travel through worlds and gain power along the way...from weak to strong he shall become the Bunny Emperor!
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3評論
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- 更新的穩定性
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寫檢討
The premise itself is intriguing although i may say that there are too few chapters to form an accurate impression. Nevertheless I advice that you don't put commentary or explanation within the chapters themselves as it breaks the story's flow. You can place them at the end along with any links you might add. You might also look for an editor poverty is different from proprety.
Yeah you need edited and yeah like that guy say put explanation on end or something but pretty much a interesting story I must say and 140 words ddddddjjjjdjjddkdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjfjfjfj
ARE YOU GONNA DROP THIS ONE TOO???.... DUDE, PLEASE STOP RUINING THE SITE.... (IT'S NOT YOUR GRAMMAR, IT'S THE ATTITUDE)!!! [we dont need regular updates, but dropping them in middle of nowhere is *********** @#$@$$$#@!!!!]