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A man dies on his way home in a car accident. Waking up in a totally different world, discovering that life had not only given him another chance but new things to discover, powers beyond his imagination.
The powers of Blackagar Boltagon, the king of the Inhumans.
But as they say, every power has a price, and his price to pay is silence. But as a wise man once said, silence can be a source of great strength.
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The reason for 5 stars? Well, it's Cornbringer. Nuff said...................................................................................
Mediocre is the best I can describe it. Nothing differs from canon as it is a slight rehash of those events with similar outcomes. My main issue is how the author wrote this. The MC's memories are faulty at the most convenient of times. Where ROB has taken his long term memory and butchered it until the plot calls for it to become relevant. So we get arcs where the MC just 'remembers' what the big secret is through some hard core plot armor leading the way. So we are left in the dark concerning his actions until he rediscovers his 'missing' memory, I mean plot points where he no longer stumbles in the dark. Then we have the romantic interest who is 'raven', but it doesn't develop into anything as of c119. Where our MC will proceed to go full edgy mode with her wanting to tag along. However, this could've been avoided with a simple explanation of his future knowledge that would've prevented this disaster. But, I forgot the MC got some brain issues as the author loves his soap opera. Also did I forget that foreshadowing of deathstroke is way to obvious? Its almost as if the author wants the MC to join the villains at this stage. Not even trying to hide it as a an igneous alternative. Since we had over 20chps of batman going over this 'betrayal' plan in great detail. In other words, I think this review doesn't deserve a spoiler as everything written is too blatant to be left wondering of how the plot would unfold.
5 for writing quality and stability of updates, 3 for everything else.....its getting boring, like I know it's supposed to be a slow fic and I respect that but with locked memories trope + powers too dangerous to actually be used it just kinda feels like the MC is an inferior batman.....literally a chipmunk with magic could wipe the floor with him and it's been a 100 chapters. It would've been fine if the slice of life moments in between were good but the best joke so far has been Oliver Queen's mustache so this.....this just not it. I'd honestly rather you give this up and maybe work on the twilight: venom fic or something, at least that seems interesting.
I don't understand why the rating is so high. It has potential but the author makes the story very boring. The main character is a brat and he's a coward, which makes it that much harder to read.
The main character is legitimately the worst apart of the book. Take all the frustrations you auve with regular superheroes, add a good dash of constant moping and self doubt, and you'd have him.Also, it's dropped, so that's an even lower rating. At least the DC world is accurate enough.
Hah as always smooth hero boy with big sister and boring asf..I saw the ratings High so i came but alas it's your little Superboy with depression who can't even control his powers
A bit meh. This story is more about psychology than super heroes. We're not following an insert with the powers of Black Bolt dealing with crime in DC in an OP way. We're following a dude that deals with being incredible depressed due to having the powers of Black Bolt and how he grows up while never using them. It would be better to describe this fic as an insert with minor super strength and resistance that is dealing with depression...in DC.
Overall, it was very frustrating. You give a guy an OP powerset and then feed him power piece meal. That along with thier being NOTHING else to this novel then fighting bad guys leaves alot of emptiness in the plot area.Then this is written like a mystery novel or should have been if you wanted to write a Dark Kinght style fanfic. But there is no real mystery. No, who done it. Last but not least, why are you modeling someone who is supposed to be as strong as Superman off batman. Makes no sense. I came for someone with the powers of Black Bolt, but what i got was a batman knock-off.
All I can say is that it's excellent though I would love to see the length of the chapters increase but that isn't a significant issue. Ps: Please don't make the mc into a father as you did with the marvel one.
4/4/1/1/4 MC is not a human at all he is robot in which you press a switch and he will have unbreakable will and turn it off and he just a 'normal' guy
It's a decent story, my only problem with it is how MC's(Black Bolt's) powers are treated. For the first couple dozen chapters, they're viewed with nothing but fear. It's understandable considering what happened when they awakened, but it is very disappointing to have a character be given these powers and never use them even when in danger of dying. He fights Deathstroke and loses badly all because he can't use his powers. The reasoning is solid, a single whisper could destroy a city and kill millions, but that's part of the problem. He's ALWAYS going to have a legitimate reason not to use his powers. When a scream from him can destroy entire countries, according to Batman's calculations, and his powers are only going to grow STRONGER as he ages into adulthood... When could he possibly have the chance to use them? He's been far more focused on training to control NOT making sounds than he has with controlling the sounds he does make. As his powers get stronger, his control is only going to be more difficult. So this isn't Black Bolt, this is a teenage mute Batman with the powers of Captain America.
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If you look at my Profile....you can see that I am a CORNBRINGER "Fan". I was there when He uploaded the first chapters of his first FF on Webnovel and, most of the time, I liked them. I didn't like the PJ one for personal reasons because I didn't like his " relationship" with Aphrodite...I, later on, learned that he killed her, so I like that ;) Anyways, I loved the first chapters and hope for more to come.....always a pleasure reading them. #CORNBRINGER, aye? RaRaRaRa
Don't listen to people that give 5 stars just because of the author, the story is really entertaining, the mc is really cool and and its really an enjoyable read and i would not be surprised if this was canon at all
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The Name cornbringer is just enough for 5 stars. Btw are Inhumans going to be there as well?. I am so happy to post this. every fiber of my body worships cornbringer-sama. Love you. You are super sexy by the way even though I never met you. would really appreciate if you coment a "hi"