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摘要
How I lived my second life:
???: You will not know the world you are going into now decide.
Me: I wish to be lucky.
You might think this is dumb, but I have no idea where I'm going, I could ask to have an overpowered ability only for it to be stolen by a jealous relative. Worse, an enemy of mine could get tensei'ed into the past and prevent me from awakening said ability. Being lucky at the very least increases my chance of survival in an unknown world.
The being snaps his or her fingers and I found myself in the body of a baby. I did not have the time to stabilize my bearings as I saw something heading toward me. My first and last thought in this life were the same.
Me: "Is that a knife?!"
I woke up in front of that being again.
???: HOW? You barely lived five seconds before getting murdered!
How I lived my third life:
READ THE FAN-FICTION!
Weekly updates:
1 Chapter per week on Friday EST.
Another story I did during my two months haitus.
The clasic isekai.
I don't own anything (Cover pic, Dc characters, ect...) other then the MC.
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Could only read upto chapter 5 it's way to boring 😴 😒 ..................................................................................................
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DO NOT WRITE DIALOGUE LIKE ITS A SCREENPLAY. It ruins immersion and makes the story borderline unreadable. you have an interesting premise, but getting past chapter one was way more hassle than it had any right to be.
this is so good this might become my favorite story here if the upload speed stays the same. I need more words to post this review,,,,,,,,,,
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it was going great until you put him with young justice at his power lvl.
it's written like a classic power trip where some rando gets wishes and somehow ends up being way too overpowered for the wishes. granted I haven't really gotten into the comics but I've watched a bunch of DC movies and most of these characters are basically written as if they were OC's. the author tries to make the MC arrogant but he really just comes off as a kid throwing a tantrum and everyone just lets him
I enjoy the story but there are way to many coincidences and dues ex machinas for my taste. Like everything that happens seems to be perfect for someone against Acnologia.
This story is all over the place with the author acting like it's supposed to be a mystery or thriller but is just a mess that hardly makes sense. Then he randomly adds time travel shenanigans and time booms and it some how becomes an even worse mess. The fic is a hidge disappointment.
It's pretty good, the author built a pretty beautiful lore for the MC. He's not too arrogant to the point of Chinese MCs and he strives to get more power, his goal is less pronounced(for me) though. But so far overall it's a pretty good fic
One of the better justice league fan fictions. The main character isn’t boring. The setting is ,of course, interesting. The beginning story is what sells this the most. Here is five stars to keep you going.
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O protagonista é legal , a história é ótima e mandou um grande "FODA-SE" para a moralidade distorcida autojustificada dos super-heróis da DC Comics . Parabéns
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first time I have read a story of an atlantean it is unusual to use a sea character most of the time the mc will be alien magician or a metahuman with overpowered abilities that it becomes dull and boring. I am excited to see about this story development 👍👍
Zero dialogue. Written like a bad essay in 3rd person