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Is this a fanfic? Why are all the chapters locked? . ........ ...... ....... ........ ......... ......
don't understand the story and no background information sorry but not a story for me ... .. . （╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\（╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\（╯°□°）╯︵(\ .o.)\
All the preview chapters are filled with begging for stones and coins to unlock the first chapter with any actual content. This author is obviously Being pushed up by the app if he can get so many positive Reviews with the novel in the state its in. He literall stated in the second chapter that he wont post anything if his precived level of appropriate support is not met. Entitled without proof of skill sir.
what a beautiful story. I am sincerely impressed. Tobi makes me want to keep reading. I want to know what happens to him and how he will live as a demon. so much curiousity. please more updates and more beautiful stories like this.
If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.
Wow! I am not the one to love this kind of genre but still, this one got me. It's really interesting, cool, and well written. From the synopsis to the chapters, everything is beautifully done.
Hey Author, i think you have made a mistake and replaced actual story chapters With anunsment chapters. because right now there is a big time skip after the first chapter
WOW, what did I just read! this is very captivating from the very beginning and the way the author keeps the suspense floating describing the personalities keeps you bound to the book. Keep up!
Couldn't read anything. there are no preview chapters. so I don't know if I want to read the story and sick around. you got to pay starting at chapter one. author forgets this is webnovels not e-books or Amazon books... =,(
I've only skimmed it because the story is vague and undescriptive so take this review with a grain of salt, the only reason i am even doing this review is because the author has seemed to confused inspiration and plagerisim, you see if i took the entire plot of the first 10 movies in the marvel universe then changed up some names, slapped it onto webnovel, then started to write a unique story nothing would change. and i saw in a comment that webnovel would remove any novels that plagerise, which is super weird becaue they themselves plagerise for example ED the rights to translate it were bought straight from the author on wuxiaworld yet here it is on this website with a "dropped" status i wonder why, if that's not good enough for you look at 60-80 percent of all the novels in the whats next section pretty much all of them are ripped from Chinese websites, can you guess what those Chinese websites do most of the time. also a side note you should probably stop making stories then immediately dropping it.
I didn't read the story but I'm sus of something why is every review here level one and doesn't have more than movements I think Author-san is boosting but I really don't care as long as the story is good so is anyone here actually going to tell me if the story is good or no?
This is such a good book, OMG! more people need to read this, is it ok if I tell some other people about it? Everything is just fabulous in this book! Keep up the great work![img=recommend]
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Honestly a pretty interesting story, flow might be a bit slow, but not too slow. For the grammar junkies this story should not be a problem to read either. Anyway just wanted to leave a good review to boost it up a bit considering it is more interesting than many others who seem popular for no reason.
Just read the novel without reading the comments, form your own opinion on the novel. Its a good novel with good story, good characters and good plot. If you read it, you will like it.
Can you be specific on his actual personality? The synopsis was pretty vague. I’ll gve you five stars since it looks good
As soon I saw the summary I knew this was the kind of style I like where the main character inst a good person, i like when there evil and on the road to destruction
So far I haven't found anything wrong about the novel, in fact I kinda like reading it (or it must be due to me having the taste in this kind of genre.). the writing was so vivid that it made me immerse in the author's novel world. the mc had a great character design, too. the problem is the writing stability which is easy to fix so the author can rest assure.
An interested take on a reincarnation story, I'm amazed at how the author can update so frequently. If you can't stand waiting for chapters, give this story a read!
Author supporting his own work, this is a novel that will be updated daily as you support my work. An action weak to strong, in a twilight twist, as the character develop in a world... which was not anything like the one he lived in. It was darker, bleaker and down right cruel, a demon child who are sworn destructor of humanity. But not only does he have to struggle with his upside down life, but he must also take advantage of his situation to grow in an existence known as "Pride Dracula."