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Jason is reincarnated as Jason Todd before Batman found him. He is reborn with the Cyberpunk System that allows him to purchase cyberware and weapons from the franchise. And as a future Edgerunner, Jason can't be hanging around Batman. So now, he will be taking the streets by storm himself with a crew of his own design. And the world will know the handle, Red Hood.
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The MC's choices are very weird, even taking into account out the villain like story development. Like going for a melee like build when having tech way beyond the times. The cyberpunk system just seems kinda mismatched with the MC's choices and underutilized. And then there is giving his tech away to others, that's where I drew the line and dropped
the story had a lot of potential but i really didn't understand the mc's choices first he decides to become a criminal in the world of dc that in itself has no problem but he has no reason he just decides to be a villain and then he just decides to join to one of the most dangerous organizations in the dc world not to mention he still reveals his power for no reason
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From what I can tell, he told Talia Al Ghul that he has a system. That’s all you need to know to not read this fanfiction.
Started off a bit iffy but the main problems I had with it was that the mc really had no reason to become a villain, we don’t even know his reasons why but the one that annoyed me The most was he told talia al ghul who he recently met about his system and was giving upgardes out like candy
a story that started well despite having some problems with the main character as he seems to have no goals and the decisions the author made in the story were meaningless to say the least.
honestly the story had a lot of potential but for some reason the author decided to follow a path at least bad since let's be honest being a villain in the dc universe is one of the worst choices and even with his system he will never be as strong as the heroes but strong but other than that the story is average there is nothing very good apart from the idea of the story but there is also nothing too bad
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This is a nice story I liked so far its detailed and it's easy to understand so keep up the good work and I will remember to check when a new chapter comes out. Good luck with the novel. -BattelC
Chapter 2 rn, and so far the story is good. I like how paced the action is, in most recent stuff authors like to describe the scene rather than show it. I’m hoping that mc gains a bit more personality and that other characters are describe realistically. So far so good, liking the story and waiting for it to get some viewers; good job author. [img=recommend]
had the potential to be a good story but the author decided to go down a bad path to say the least.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It great you put details into character building world building and writing quality is honest one of the better ones on Webnovel keep up the great work and I’ll keep reading
Very entertaining. I've gone to the most recent chapter and enjoyed all of it. The writing quality is top-notch compared to many stories on this website, and even then, the grammar and sentence structure is excellent. Nothing like reading a formal paper, but definitely has higher quality than most novels I have read. Stability I can't say much, but I would say for the length of the chapters, it has a reasonable update schedule. Story development is also worthy of a 5/5. It's not too fast, or too slow. And finally, the last two can be combined for a 5/5. The designs and feelings of both the world and the characters don't feel 'robotic' or 'bland', and also do not follow any of the super-common tropes. Overall, the story is worthy of a 5/5, and hopefully, the author keeps up the good work!
A good start, keep going author!!! I wonder how are you gonna how are you gonna handle the relationship between he mc and other bat family/ Justice league members.
I feel like someone is trolling u giving bad reviews u should check and not let some rubbish reviews get to u, Ur work is really good, I hope u finish it, i don't really want to see an author who drops his fic cuz of trolls, it happens to plenty dc fanfics
have him use the qiant sandevistan with the 4 sec cd reducing mods and also the 30% cd-reducing cyberware. It's op since its 2 seconds of cooldown for 12 seconds of 25% slowed down time. Also, get him mantis blades or smth cool like that
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I think you missed an opportunity to make a businessman character like lex luttor, instead of some criminal in Gotham, with all the technology in the system you could create a company and try to turn Gotham into Night City (I thought this now but Gotham is perfect for that). After all, let's agree that with this system the mc has a very weak power limit compared to DC characters.