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Ben Tennyson as an adult finds himself in the D.C. universe after working on a null void projector and getting sucked in during a malfunction. With no hurry to get home, how will Ben enjoy his time in this universe?
This is just for fun so no frequent uploads. It's rated R-18 but I don't know if I'm gonna do a harem. In this story, Ben is an adult and has master control and new additions.
I DO NOT claim ownership of any characters and places mentioned in this story. Enjoy!
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author can you make this a harem but the only different is that can you make him act alone not together with his harem cause I don't like when his harem are always with him
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Well I like it so far just the idea of reading a novel Where Ben crossover to DC is exciting and adding more to that of having Master Control....that will make him Most overpowered character in novel. I like everything so far except where ben just literally say to the girl that "I started to fall for you" I really dont like that part.... I mean it hadn't been 2 days that he came to universe and said that he wasn't in hurry to go back to his universe and wanted to explore DC universe....but what he did was to started to do romantic shit..... I really don't like it ( Others may have different opinions but in this I am talking about mine). And listen I am not against some love or romance between them what I am against about it is that at least write those feelings properly so that it will look good to read, not that just in 1 or 2 days "I am falling in love with you" I don't like this kind of Fucking fast romantic shit..... If Author can change that then It will be a perfect novel.....
The story idea is very good, The transition between the universes is smooth and also it isn't like when he loses everything or one where he can't return home.
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Since no one is doing a real assessment, neither will I. Act I think up to 20 chapters, which should be like 16, because the rest are advertisements. This fanfic is not good. Everything is too easy, and they tell stories like an old veteran. Honestly nobody cares. If it says so, it should be short.
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This is good.(period), want a reason? read the book you'll know why....more reasons? Alright then... First, Mature MC. Second, OP MC done right. Third, world is built beautifully, I'm not an expert but when I read a book that has a moving world I think it is beautiful. Fourth, the crossover of DC and Ben 10 is just really interesting and well-written. Like I said not a professional, purely opinionated.
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yeey HAREM I like more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
Enjoyed reading it. Need more chapters 😩 Keep up the good work author and I’m hoping for more chapters soon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This...... is....... honestly........... beautiful.......... in....... its...... full..... glory.... that..... this..... literature......... is.......
I already wrote a review this is just for exp....also stone this author to death! by throwing power stones at him hohohohoho... EXP hehe.....
Thanks for the novel i loved everything about it even though i am not a fan of dc. Do you think i can use your Ben for making a novel about him in marvel. I always struggled with making my oc startup journey and i think this can help me develop my writing skills.
Good book plz update more :) .....?.........................................................................................................................................................................................
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5.0 kust because you took something like ben-10 and maddest a lot more interesting than mundane like what the show developers did, still have fond memories of the original episodes and series thus thanks for taking your time on a fan fiction like this, makes him seem OP without making him seem so much OP
make a harem, but kore of like a one night stand type of thing, harem with lovers all around the place like most cliche chinese novels are bland and boring, the plot never thickens, its mostly about the lovers getting kidnapped and whatnot
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The book is really good I also have a question is this Harem? because I would prefer him being maybe a loner since all books with love interests get boring after a while.