Darwin111111

Darwin111111

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No hay mucho que quiera decir, quiero ganar algo de dinero haciendo mi pasatiempo (Entrenamiento) para luego hacer una novela.

2019-03-13 加入 Dominican Republic
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Darwin111111
Darwin111111
10 days ago
Replied to WulfricTheodore

The cringe level of this fanfic is more than 9,000

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
15 days ago
Commented

Old. I've put up with it, and it's not like I'm going to stop reading. But they all seem to speak the same as the protagonist. I mean, at least it's distinctive enough, but when they get together to throw out praise, it seems like they take their time spelling it out. It just doesn't feel very natural. There's something there that, at least to me, makes it feel artificial. (Not enough to not read the story, but enough to be uncomfortably noticeable.)

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
Darwin111111
16 days ago
Commented

The fact that the suits have names is pointless. They shouldn't even have thought of it or classified it yet.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
16 days ago
Commented

Sounds good. I was honestly waiting for this kind of story... One where the protagonist isn't someone else's self-insertion... No rimuru is ritsuka, no ritsuka is Subaru or shirou. Simply. Ritsuka and that's it.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
16 days ago
Replied to Scaith

I only had to read the synopsis to know what a pointless piece of shit it was. It was probably trying to fill plot holes with comedy... I mean, absurd explanations.

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Darwin111111
Darwin111111
24 days ago
Commented

Well, the definitive one is Shirou from Fate. On the way Rin could enter in her desire to study mysteries or understand blessings... Kirei no... Matou no. They are very unpleasant in personality and physique. Well, if you want to take a heroic spirit. I would say Emiya Archer himself, but it is more likely that he will disappear to continue working as a Contra Guardian. Ilia could be good depending on how you do it. She has no family. And even if you don't include her in the battles, she could be good support in the sense of being a good sister, family or something.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
24 days ago
Commented

How about kasuma. The guy would go to another world without any consideration. That or you just tell him it'll be a trip to 'level up in a dungeon X' and then he goes back to the beginner village in his world. Another could be... People from post-apocalyptic worlds like Highschool dead... Even highschool dxd with Issei... Although to see how his human friends improve... No, that's not really a good idea. Perverted friends are the protagonist's remedy and are on another level... I haven't seen their manga versions, so in my mind there are their exaggeratedly perverted versions from the anime.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
25 days ago
Replied to Kyo44

Yeah... Sharingan isn't that good if you consider that the opponent must have chakra to put him in an illusion. Or that's what the wiki says, because they send their chakra to the opponent's so it reaches the brain and they manipulate it and blah blah blah. If they don't have it then they'll make up something about there being no resistance.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111
26 days ago
Commented

Ha... The changes. That always makes everything less fun. Mainly because we can't see everyone's reactions.