/ Fantasy / Ancient Hypnosis
摘要
A person gets transmigrated to ancient china as the current crown prince with a world conquest system which gives him some abilities which he uses for more than just world conquest.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
this is a novel focused on smut which i have never written so i want to try it. I am a total amateur in this area so some critique would be helpful.
Contains: hypnosis/mind control, Yandere( A lot but will like be more the submissive type). a little netori but NO NTR and will also contain underage sex till even 12 or something like that so if that disgusts you pls don't read this.
Also Incest
also if there are some pictures they are from pintrest and if their respective creator doesn't want them here il put them away
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
I just wanna say i respect woman and people and that this is just a novel with no disrespect to women
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
Top 10 Fantasy Books
17評論
4.61
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Giving my honest opinion, it is a very good read, as far as I am reading it is very good, there is no Yuri, stupid morals, nonsense of hesitation or meek MC, this is your novel if you like yanderes and ocenity , So I give it a 9/10, not nine because it is impossible with the number of women it has to pay attention to each one unless it does 100 chapters for each one so it was something that was not I could avoid, although I like the harem, that would be its fault that I see.
More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel Brother God bless you Brother [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i just don't like the start, he just adapt to everything that happened to him easily.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.
a very good novel i like the way that its so straight forward but the writing is sometimes... interesting from the grammatical aspect
maybe sometimes unusual or bad writing but i like the story and how he goes on about it
fast h@४६m. I like mind manipulation plots so this is for me. has a huge vatiety of girls. read it
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
I am the bone of my XP Grinding is my body Spamming is my blood I have written countless messages Unknown to Trolls Nor known to Mods Have withstood countless aching joints but my fingers just can't stop ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) So as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!!
The story is coming soon
I love it bro, i hope continue even if it's for slow updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]